Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!

Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!

Innocent_Smile, Mindless, AsSweetAs, GS ** and **KhamoshNigahein, aap dostoN ka be'had shukriya. Thanx for liking the poem :)

ghazal kisi ke, the poem you posted is also a good one. Theme is same but I guess exressions are way different. Anyway, thanx for liking the poem and sharing another :)

Rameesha ji aek, aek kar ke sab post kar dooN ga, thora sa time lagey ga :-)

Chalye achi baat hey, aek guest ka khaana bach jaey ga :-)

Chodhry sahab agar aap pehley post ki hui poem deikheiN to us mein 3 alag, alag situations theeN...1) Tootey huwey pattey, 2) tthrey huwey paani, 3) uljhey huwey dhaagey, to daawat ko jo menu tha na us meiN ye teen items hui na, aur ab ye chotthi, 4) sehma huwa parinda. Baat aai samajh meiN? By the way, thanx for liking it :)