Tum ney dekha he mujee?

Rameesha · October 30, 2002, 2:21pm

Tum ney murjhaye howey phool kabhi dekhey haiN?
dil ki qabrooN pe parhey…
hijr ki laash ki aankhooN pe dharey…
tum ney uktaye howey khwaab kabhi dekhey haiN?
dard ki palkooN sey liptey howey
ghhabraye hoye
tum ney bechain duaaeeN kabhi dekhi haiN???
muhabbat key kinarooN pe bhatakti phirti
tum ney dekha he mujee?
keya kabhi dekha he mujee???

Eastern_Thoughts · October 30, 2002, 2:23pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Rameesha: *
**Tum ney murjhaye howey phool kabhi dekhey haiN?
dil ki qabrooN pe parhey...
hijr ki laash ki aankhooN pe dharey...
tum ney uktaye howey khwaab kabhi dekhey haiN?
dard ki palkooN sey liptey howey
ghhabraye hoye
tum ney bechain duaaeeN kabhi dekhi haiN???
muhabbat key kinarooN pe bhatakti phirti
tum ney dekha he mujee?
keya kabhi dekha he mujee???*
[/QUOTE]

Very Nice Rameesha :(

Amal · October 30, 2002, 3:25pm

Re: Tum ney dekha he mujee?

bohat khoob Rameesha jik: … baaqi sab kuch
to deikha hey lekin kai dinoN sey aap ko nahi deikha

arifnawaz1 · October 30, 2002, 4:20pm

Dard se bhari huwi... !

Nice contribution and thanks for sharing :)

system · October 30, 2002, 4:29pm

wowwwwww, zabardast :k:

Thanx sis

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 30, 2002, 4:41pm

Re: Tum ney dekha he mujee?

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Rameesha: *
**Tum ney murjhaye howey phool kabhi dekhey haiN?
dil ki qabrooN pe parhey...
hijr ki laash ki aankhooN pe dharey...
tum ney uktaye howey khwaab kabhi dekhey haiN?
dard ki palkooN sey liptey howey
ghhabraye hoye
tum ney bechain duaaeeN kabhi dekhi haiN???
muhabbat key kinarooN pe bhatakti phirti
tum ney dekha he mujee?
keya kabhi dekha he mujee???*
[/QUOTE]

A very Sad Poetry Rameesha Jii:-(

sniff

Rameesha · October 30, 2002, 7:03pm

Re: Re: Tum ney dekha he mujee?

kissi ki “aah” pe “wah” kehtey ho logoo sigh

Amal jee agar aap ney baqi sab kochh dekh liya to samjhiye mujee hi dekh liya … jahan tak baat dinooN ki he to kochh masrofiyat thi jis ki wajah sey aa naheen payi …

arifnawaz1 · October 30, 2002, 7:08pm

Re: Re: Re: Tum ney dekha he mujee?

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Rameesha: *
kissi ki "aah" pe "wah" kehtey ho logoo *sigh:(

[/QUOTE]

Aah ko chaaheyay, ik umer assar hone tak !

Waisay, shayad mein ne wah wah tu nahee kiya thaa, haan itna zaroor kaha thaa ke aap ki contribution, dard se bhari hai !!! Sorry if it hurts ya :(

nikii · October 30, 2002, 8:04pm

:)
nice :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 31, 2002, 2:52pm

:k: bhoot achayy

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 2, 2002, 12:51am

nice:k:

Jaan_Lewaa · November 3, 2002, 12:56am

wah ji wah:k:

lost_soul · November 3, 2002, 1:47am

Rameesha, hope everything is fine at ur end, hugs :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · November 3, 2002, 12:33pm

mei nei apko nehi dekha
btw nice nazm:k: