~Tum ne iqraar maanga hay~

system · September 8, 2004, 8:02pm

**
Tum ne iqraar maanga hay
Tou suno
Dil kay suchey jazbey
Izhaar kay muhtaaj nahiN hotey
Ye woh juzbey haiN jo jugnoo ban ker
AankhooN maiN chamaktey haiN
HoontooN kay garam goshoN maiN reh ker
Dil maiN bastey haiN
Tum mujh maiN iss tarah samaaye hovey ho
Keh jaisey
TaarooN maiN chamak, titlee maiN rung
Mera rishta atoot hay
Jism-o-jaaN ka hay
Jo juRa rahey tou zindigi
Aur toot jaaye tou mout

**

Pyara_sa_doost · September 8, 2004, 8:35pm

Re: ~Tum ne iqraar maanga hay~

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ** Vivacious **: *
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Tum ne iqraar maanga hay
Tou suno
Dil kay suchey jazbey
Izhaar kay muhtaaj nahiN hotey
Ye woh juzbey haiN jo jugnoo ban ker
AankhooN maiN chamaktey haiN
HoontooN kay garam goshoN maiN reh ker
Dil maiN bastey haiN
Tum mujh maiN iss tarah samaaye hovey ho
Keh jaisey
TaarooN maiN chamak, titlee maiN rung
Mera rishta atoot hay
Jism-o-jaaN ka hay
Jo juRa rahey tou zindigi
Aur toot jaaye tou mout

**
[/QUOTE]

wow gr8 stuff bohat kohb Vivacious bohat kohb kaha :)

keep sharing:) thanx

tata:)

Maheen2002 · September 8, 2004, 11:15pm

Zabardast

ghazal_kisi_ke · September 8, 2004, 11:55pm

veryyyy niceee .. :k: ..

cuteepie · September 9, 2004, 1:28am

:k:

system · September 9, 2004, 9:24am

thanks so much pyaara sa dost .. :)

Maheen- thanks yaar.. hug

ghazal- thanks ghazalo hug

cuteepie- thanks :)

Zakhmi_Umar · September 9, 2004, 9:52am

nice , thanx for sharing :k:

Diva · September 9, 2004, 10:55am

I really like YOUR economy in selection of Poetry Vivi .

Saqi_the_angel · September 9, 2004, 11:18am

Re: ~Tum ne iqraar maanga hay~

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ** Vivacious **: *
*
Tum ne iqraar maanga hay
Tou suno
Dil kay suchey jazbey
Izhaar kay muhtaaj nahiN hotey
Ye woh juzbey haiN jo jugnoo ban ker
AankhooN maiN chamaktey haiN
HoontooN kay garam goshoN maiN reh ker
Dil maiN bastey haiN
Tum mujh maiN iss tarah samaaye hovey ho
Keh jaisey
TaarooN maiN chamak, titlee maiN rung
Mera rishta atoot hay
Jism-o-jaaN ka hay
Jo juRa rahey tou zindigi
Aur toot jaaye tou mout

**
[/QUOTE]

Janab Yeh kisne Iqraar maang liya. I think he did the right thing to ask for iqraar because:

woh kehtay phirtay haiN ke woh marta hai muj par
shaid soorat be nah dekhi ho "Qamar" ki

Isliyeh woh janab se iqraar ka keh rahe haiN kehiN aisa no ke aap dagha likhti rahaiN aur woh duaa partay rahIn to janab mofft mashwara yeh hai ke Iqraar kijiyah ya inkaar kijiyah par zara jaldi kijiyeh kiyounke becharey ki jaan atki hui hai.

Kahi apke ke iqraar ke intezaar maiN un ki ghtaa jaisee kali zulfoon main chandi na aajay.

Sarkar aapka to kuch nahiN jayega aap to haiN he saudai lekin kuch un ka khiyal kijiyeh.........................

Tk cr

Saqi

SunnyBoy · September 10, 2004, 8:06am

:k:

system · September 10, 2004, 4:22pm

Saqi_the_angel- aap ko shayed bohat hi khayal hay uss shakhs ka, jiss ne iqraar maanga hay.. :p aap k muft mashwerey ka shukeriya.. mein uss ko pehlay hi jawab dey chuki hoon..

thanks sunny uncle, diva & umer- :-)

Nazi83 · September 11, 2004, 2:02am

Vivo nice one

Dilsay · September 11, 2004, 9:16pm

Aap nay bulkul saheeh kaha magar aap ya behi bata dain ka yahan dil kay jazboon ko samajahnay walay yahan hain he kitnay..

Saqi_the_angel · September 16, 2004, 11:07am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ** Vivacious *: *
**Saqi_the_angel- aap ko shayed bohat hi khayal hay uss shakhs ka, jiss ne iqraar maanga hay.. :p aap k muft mashwerey ka shukeriya.. mein uss ko pehlay hi jawab dey chuki hoon..

thanks sunny uncle, diva & umer- :-)
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Iqraar ya Inkaar???

system · September 16, 2004, 4:03pm

nazi83 thanks

dilsay mujhey nahi maloom..

Saqi_the_angel ye baat bataney wali nahi..

Saqi_the_angel · September 17, 2004, 9:12am

Yeh to ziyadti kar rahee haiN app???

system · September 17, 2004, 1:25pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Saqi_the_angel: *

Yeh to ziyadti kar rahee haiN app???
[/QUOTE]

woh kaisey??

shoaib_akhter · September 17, 2004, 3:51pm

nice :k:
tnx for sharing

Saqi_the_angel · September 20, 2004, 8:27am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ** Vivacious ***: *

woh kaisey??
[/QUOTE]

Janab,

hum yeh arz kar rahey haiN ke us naik bakhatka naam bataiyeh aur aap haiN ke us taraf ja he nahiN rahee.

Janab itni mintaiN khuda ki kartay to woh be bari se bari khawish pori kar deta!!!

Saqi

system · September 20, 2004, 11:14am

shobii- thanks

saqi- mein nahi bata sakti na uss ka naam..

aur aap ab minatein kerna shuru ker dein khuda ki, kiyon k kum se kum aap ki khuahish hi pori ho jaaye gi :-p