tum ne he chaha tha khushk hoontooN se chahatooN k gulab likhooN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

NikamiJano November 4, 2006, 1:45am 1

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ajab khava’eish hai shahar waloN se chup chup kar kitaab likhooN
tum’haaray naam apni zindghi ki kitaab ka intsaab likhooN

tum ne meray ujaa’r rastooN pe khava’eishooN k de’ay jalaa’ey
tum ne he chaha tha khushk hoontooN se chahatooN k gulab likhooN

maiN tanha larki daya-re-shab maiN jala’ooN such k de’ay kahaN taak
sehaa’kaarooN ki sultanat maiN kis tarha aa’ftaab likhooN***

Shab-e-Hijar November 4, 2006, 3:00am 2

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wah very nice jano gi :-)

Precious_Khan November 4, 2006, 8:30am 3

Re: tum ne he chaha tha khushk hoontooN se chahatooN k gulab likhooN

Buhat Khoob :-)

mahamkhan November 4, 2006, 11:55am 4

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Buhat acchi :-)

Aryaan November 4, 2006, 12:26pm 5

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It’s Beautiful NikamiJano..:k:

Amal November 4, 2006, 1:24pm 6

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Nice one NikamiJi :k: … Bashir Badr sahab ka kalaam to nahi ye? Lagta to unhi ka hey

Prince_Ali November 4, 2006, 5:14pm 7

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Buhut khub :k:

NikamiJano November 5, 2006, 1:42pm 8

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nahi Aymal ye “munawar Jameel” ki hia ap ko pata hia me random shaa’eRoon ko zaida parti

HeArT_HaCKeR November 5, 2006, 3:18pm 9

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Boht khoob nikammi jii.

_Masoom_Muskaan November 5, 2006, 5:36pm 10

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v nice jano je:)

sunny_nicky November 5, 2006, 8:44pm 11

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keepp it up nikamiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nice haaan

Bholay_Bisray November 7, 2006, 9:30am 12

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Beautiful!

hashr jaisii vo gha.Dii hotii hai
dil pe uftaad pa.Dii hotii hai
sard aaho.n kii jha.Dii hotii hai
garm ashko.n kii la.Dii hotii hai
soch raasto.n me.n ga.Dii hotii hai
hijr kii raat kaa aalam taubaa
hijr kii raat ka.Dii hotii hai

Amal November 7, 2006, 12:04pm 13

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Ye random shair kon heiN Anyway, acha kalaam hey. Aur kuch Munawar sahab ke kalaam sey?

GuL-e-Tasbeeh November 7, 2006, 1:33pm 14

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buhat khoob Nikami ji:-)

EEMAAN November 8, 2006, 1:32pm 15

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bohat khooob..

NikamiJano November 10, 2006, 9:51pm 16

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Emaan se

NikamiJano November 10, 2006, 9:51pm 17

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shukria g :)

NikamiJano November 10, 2006, 10:27pm 18

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itnay jo famous nahi hotey :)…i will fine some more

The reason i dont flood

The reason i dont flood

Zakhmi_Umar November 11, 2006, 1:53pm 19

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Khoob :k:

NikamiJano November 18, 2006, 2:41am 20

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thanks