Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

[Dushwari]

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AQ, achee poem hey.
Dushwari

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

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nehe abhe taq toh nehe deikha ap nei dekha he :)

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

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@_Masoom_Muskaan

Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

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nehe abhe taq toh nehe deikha ap nei dekha he :)

mae ne dekha hai.. 2 dafa :D

[fizatiq]

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good work...keep it up...

[being_lonely]

Re: Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

Umda Work Sayeen :k:

[P_G]

Re: Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

very touchey

tooty hoye taray ki jagha naya tara jald heee ajata hay ...: P

[glamorous]

Re: Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

wowwwwwwwwwwwww

[WiseGuy]

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Nice :k:

[case_study]

Re: Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

wah je wah, AQ bhai.
thanks for sharing the poem.
cheers!

[Capricorn]

Re: Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

tum jaantaY ho kaunsaa taaraa tootaa thaa woh :(?

Wo umaawas kee raat thee....
Zuhra* ke daayein taraf se, aik taara toota thaa......
jiske tootne par hum ne duayein maangee theen ke
ab kee baar hamaree zindagee mein agar koi museebat aaye to................
Ae Parwardigaar, hamein un nazaaron mein kho dena ke jin mein
na koi aankh nam hua kartee thee aur na koyee khwaab toota karte thay......
un duaon ka kia bana!!!!!!!
Kia us toot'te taare ne hamaree duaon ka arsh par puhanchna kaheen kaat dia tha!!!!

*symbolic

[tanzansenzaki]

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@Anwaar Qureshi

This is my new poem.

A lot of credit goes to **Amal **for looking into it and guiding me on things that I could not express the way I wanted to.

Amal, I will be bugging you later too

Umeed hai pasand aaye gee

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**Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?
**Apni hi qaeynaat sey rooThaa huwa ik toota taara!

Falak ke haath sey chootey to zameeN pe aan girey
Phir jis ke ba’ad koi shikwey raheiN na koi giley

Haalaat ki dehleez per rifaaqatoN ka behimaana qat’l
Jiss ke ba’ad woh chaahey bhi to na paaey sambhal!

BarsoN pehlaY yaad karo hum donoN ney in jaarroN meiN
do roshan taarey deikhey they door kaheiN pahaaroN meiN

uss da’m tum kuch yaad karo kiya kiya hum naY socha thaa
Ik taaraa meraa thaa aur aik taaraa unn maiN teraa thaa

sard raataiN to beet gaeiN yuNhi taktey taktey taaroN ko
jaaney phir kiss ki nazar lagi unn maasooM bechaaroN ko

Phir Ik din shaam maiN youN hee maiN beThaa kiyaa
tukk rahaa thaa aasmaaN ko kaY kuch youN huaa

unn “dau taaroN” maiN saY ik taraa TooT gayaa
Dooja taaraa aasmaanoN maiN bilkul Tanhaa reh gayaa

maiN dekhtaa rahaa, sochtaa rahaa, bahut ghaur kiyaa
maiN abb bhee naa samjhaa kaY konsaa taaraa TooT gayaa

abb maiN pochtaa hee rehtaa hooN subb saY yeh
Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

kuch jaantaY ho kaunsaa taaraa tooTaa thaa woh?
Kiss kee wafaaouN kaa khoon kar gayaa thaa woh?

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Anwaar** Q**ureshi — 2/27/2006

tuN kadhi tutda hoeya taara dekhya hai?
aapni hi quenaat ton ruthia hoya tutda taara?

asmaan de huthon chchutta tay jameen tay aa ruka
gillian tay shikaayetaan da fir hoya moonh phikka

yaad kar saalon pehlay usaan dohaan sardian wich
door paharaan tay do chamakday taaray dekhay sun

to be continued later…
lakin ab tak adaab, addab…
kyaa gazab ki urdu ki nazm hai!
aasman say zameen tak hai!

[Sheal]

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tuN kadhi tutda hoeya taara dekhya hai? aapni hi quenaat ton ruthia hoya tutda taara?

asmaan de huthon chchutta tay jameen tay aa ruka gillian tay shikaayetaan da fir hoya moonh phikka

yaad kar saalon pehlay usaan dohaan sardian wich door paharaan tay do chamakday taaray dekhay sun

to be continued later... lakin ab tak adaab, addab... kyaa gazab ki urdu ki nazm hai! aasman say zameen tak hai!

i think mental hospital say bhagay hoay hain ap.

[tanzansenzaki]

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i think mental hospital say bhagay hoay hain ap.

aur aap?
koee baray se baray doctor/doctrani?
psychiatrist?
nahin to *luckman hakeem/hakeema * zaroor hon gay
jo diagnosis karnay main laggay hain!

[AQ]

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^
welcome back rkopra