Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

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Re: Tum nay TooT-taY huaY taaraY ko kabhi dekhaa hai?

Oh man… I missed so many replies to answer..

Goodnews: what’s up with all this old threads digging movement

@Capricorn

I got myself identified in that theme. Jaaron kee sard, chandinee raaton mein woh chat pe beth ke taaron ko dekhna aur andheree raaton mein taaron ke tootne ke manaazir dil pe aaj bhee naqsh hain. Tumhare khayaal kee rawaanee mein apne khayaal ko paaya to be-khud sa rah gaya!

tum jaantaY ho kaunsaa taaraa tootaa thaa woh :(?

@Prince_Ali

:k:

thanx

@OMG

Kash main bhi aap ki tarha shairi kar sakti.

aur kaash maiN aap kee tarah paintings :~)

@Berhi_Bee

humesha ki terha bohet hi khoub
likhtay rehain …aur share kertay rehain

khoush rehain

Thanks for the duaaz

@KhamoshNigahein

It’s a wonderful poem… with a deep background… but I somehow feel it does neither represent your style of writing, neither Amal’s… I could be just me but while reading I felt like I was reading a mixture of two totally different writers… No doubt, you and Amal, both are great poets on your own way, lekin aap donoN ka ehsaas ko lafzoN key pehnaavey meiN laaney ka alag alag qareenah hai, likhney ka apna apna andaaz hai… and if I’m not mistaken, the first part of the poem is more influenced by Amal than the second part. I guess I would have liked both your and Amal’s first and untouched versions better.. no matter if it rhymes or not! But here again… it’s just a personal preference… keep it the way you like best…

laikin kiyaa uss tarah pataa chaltaa, kaunsaa taaraa tootaa thaa?