Tum Meri Ho

Nyz_DjLeo · July 27, 2010, 11:10pm

This is a nasm i wrote recently.
This is a rough draft. I have to fix few things in it.

Tum meri ho
Meray khayaalo mein he sahi

Main kush hu
Tanhai ki berang panaho mein he sahi

Zindagi chal rahi hai
Judai ki ajnabee raho mein he sahi

Likhta hu tumhara naam
apnay dil ki dewaro mein he sahi

Hum milay to milay
Gardish kartay huay sitaro main he sahi

Tum parti ho dusero kay qalaam
Meri likhi hui kitabay rudi kay kabarro mein he sahi

Amarbail · July 28, 2010, 5:14am

Re: Tum Meri Ho

Indeed, not a bad effort … :k:
Keep it up and would love to see more of your work …

Niksik · July 28, 2010, 5:17am

Re: Tum Meri Ho

Very nice.

UZ · July 28, 2010, 6:25am

Its a really nice try :k:

Nyz_DjLeo · July 29, 2010, 12:47am