TUM KAUN HO, TUM KIYA HO.......................

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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TUM KAUN HO,TUM KAYA HO,TUM DHARKAANOON KA
SAAZ HO ,TUM PYAR KI AWAAZ HO ,TUM DIL MAIN CHUPA RAAZ HO,TUM SOOZ HO ,TUM SAAZ HO ,TUM MERAY DIL KI AAS HO,TUM WADIYON KA DEED HO ,TUM REET HO ,SANGEET HO,TUM AASHQI ,TUM DILBARI ,TUM PYAR KI KALANDARI,TUM KAHKISHAAN ,TUM JAANE WIDAAN ,TUM RAAZDAAN ,TUM GULFISHAAN

    BINA TUMHARAY ZINDAGI MERI,IK AAS HAI,PYAS HAI,BUJHTA HOA IK CHARAGH HAI,NA DEED HAI ,BERANG HAI,BAIZOOQ HAI,BAI AAB HAI,BAI TAAB HAI ,BAI FAIDAY KA RAAG HAI

    MAIN KAYA HOON ,TUM KAYA HO ,TUM MERAY DIL KA CHAIN HO ,TUM MERAY MAN KA PYAR HO,TUM AASHQI KA KHUMAAR HO,DIWAANGI ,TAABINDAGI
    TUM KAUN HO ,TUM KAYA HO,TUM MERAY DIL KI AAH HO,QAYAS HO ,HAMRAZ HO ,TUM MARI ROOH KAY PAAS HO,TUFAANE HIJAR DAITI HAI HAI MUJH KO DARR,AGAR TUM NA MERAY PAAS HO? 

    AISA LAGA HAI JAISAY MERI ZINDAGEI BINA TUMHARAY IK ZINDA LAASH HO

    TUM KAUN HO ,TUM KAYA HO ,TUM MERAY DIL KA ARMAAN HO,TUM MAIRA KHAWAAB HO ,TUM MERAY DHAWAAB KI TAABEER HO

Mohabbat Koi Jurm Nahi Agar Ki Jaye Asool Say
Mohabbat Tou Khuda Bhi Karta Hai Apne Rasool Say

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Nice magaar zaraa Nazm aur gHazal likhne ka tareeq change kijye shukria:-
iss tarah likhiye parhne waaloN ko ziaada mazzaa aiga aur is ko Caps meiN na likheiN
Caps meiN likhnaa..cheekH kar bolne ke barabar hai

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Example:-

**Tum Kaun ho,tum keya ho,tum dharhkanoN ka saaz ho
tum pyaar ki Awaaz ho,tu dil mein cHupaa raaz ho

tum soz ho ,tum saaz ho ,tum mere Dil ki aas ho**

anyway mujeh aap ki nazm ki samajh nahiN aai keh kahaN se Misraa shuru hokar kahaN kHatam hotaa hai

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so keep writting lekin ussi andaaz meiN jiss tarah likhne ka Haque hotaa hai

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i am sure aap mind nahi akreinge

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kiounkeh maiN ne iss lyie abtaiya keh aap itni acHi choice itni mehnat se DhoonD kar laate haiN aur ussko iss tarah post karne se na parhne waale ko mazza aaye aur na aapko aapki choice share karne ka mazza aaye to faidaa

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**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

[This message has been edited by Tassneef (edited July 15, 2002).]

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Nice.

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