Tum Bohat Yaad Aatey Ho

AOA everybody

please allow me to introduce myself and plz welcome this piece of my heart…:slight_smile: this is my very first appearance in this forum of gupshup. As hobby i play stratagy games, read philosophical books and good poetry a lot. By profession i do e-marketing and 2-d cell animations. and my hobby and profession, together make me a good living as well as provide me a good reason to live. Sometimes, I get so much surrounded by feelings and thoughts that i cant help myself from writing it down on paper. I think its enough for the first time and as they say “aur khul jayien gey do chaar mulaqatoon mein”. So lets get into the real stuff.

Tum Bohat Yaad Aatey Ho

Mughey Iqrar hey key
kaam kertey hovey tumhaari yaad
dil key kissi goushey mein chup (hid) jaati hey
magar jab

jab, badaloon ka koi awara tukra
bataye, ya bin batay,
bersna shuru ker dey
bad-e-saba key jhounkey
chupkey chupkey chairney lagien

jab shaam dhaley
perindey apney dais ko wapis jaatey hein
Jab raat utrti hey,
Tanhaye ko daman mein sameetey
haan, jab raat utrti hey
jab yeh phool, kalyaan, derakhat, pahar, derya, samander
taroon ki thandi meethi lou mien
chaand ka intazar kertey hein

tu tumhien deikhney ko,
tumhaari awaz sunney ko,
tumhien pyar kerney ko

yeh dil machal machal jata hay
tumhaari khushbu aas paas mehsoos hoti hey
udaasi bin bulaye derrey daal leiti hey
aur tum bohat yaad aatey ho
tum bohat yaad aatey ho


plz, do let me know key kesi laggi yeh poem.

salam (beroon ko)
pyaar (chootun ko)
dua (sab ko)

:slight_smile:

Allah Hafiz

chodhry

Welcome to GS,nice poem…ty for sharing.:flower1:

aap key phool ki khushbu yaahan tak aa rhi hey direct via internet,,hehehe...
thanks a bunch from me...

innney berrey GS mein koi nahien ju do meethey bool hi encourage kerney ko keh dey. Allah mian yeh koun loug hein merey aaas paas.

First of all DILLI KHUSHAAMADEDD to GS

Nice Poem... Ye alag baat hay ke.. Mujhay Aazad Nazam paRhni naheeN aati :(

Din Bhar Tou MaiN Dunya Ke DhandhooN maiN Khoya Raha
Jab DeewaarooN se dhoop Giri... Tum Yaad Aye.

Good Luck.. and God Bless U

bahut khoob!

:k:…Welcome to GS :flower1:

nice start and welcome:)

:teary3:

Ji ayaan noon :hug: lovely:k:

bohat bohat shukrya everone, ab lagta hay kuch makhlouq basti hey GS mein. hehehe

plz also gimme comments on my other poem Parathna (Iltija) its ahindi word.

it can be viewed at

http://www.gupistan.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=111919

thanks again.

and Dania, I could not understand your quote. would u mind explaining it to me? plz…

Thank You Dania for this change in quotes…:slight_smile:

Welcome to GS, hope you enjoy your stay here, and thanks for sharing your poem:-)

keep it up

oo yes i enjoy my stay at GS. thanks for the warm welcome and encouragement

Re: Tum Bohat Yaad Aatey Ho

Walekum salam , buhat khooob jee :k: welcome on GS and in Poetry Forum , aap k aane se poetry forum ki ronaq mien izafa ho giya hai acha likha hai aap ne :k: :flower2: , i hope k aap poetry froum mien enjoy karo ge/gi humari poori koshish rahe gi k aap ki hosla afzai ki jaye :slight_smile:

Re: Re: Tum Bohat Yaad Aatey Ho

umer bohat shukria aaaap bohat achey achey ho… aur haan mein forum mein khub enjoy ker RHA hoon…:slight_smile: everbody is so nice. i never though key inni appreciation milley gee.

buhet khoob :k:

and welcome to GS :flower1:

thankyou cuteepie.

Tum bahut yaad aatey ho… Waah! :k: