Tum bin zindagi me

dard1 · May 25, 2010, 7:16am

Tum bin zindagi me veerani si chhai hai
Shaam bhi teri yaadon ka sailab lekar aai hai

Aaj bhi mehroom hoon tere pyaar se
Tumse dil lagane ki saza kya khoob maine paai hai

Ye meri khata hai ki tujhko apna khuda bana baithi
Fitrat me to tere aaj bhi bewafai hai

Phir bhi dua hai meri; har khushi mile tujhko
Kismat me to apni bus tanhai hai

aaliyahkhan1 · May 25, 2010, 7:28am

Re: Tum bin zindagi me

so true very nice :k:

Boredman · May 25, 2010, 8:05am

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dard1 · May 25, 2010, 8:16am

Re: Tum bin zindagi me

thank u Bore uncel & AK

Sannan · May 25, 2010, 8:26am

Re: Tum bin zindagi me

buhat khoub Dard1 …
kia baat hay aap key poetry selection buhat dukhi hoti hay :aq: … try to share some cool ones too

dard1 · May 25, 2010, 9:15am

Re: Tum bin zindagi me

haye jish ka name hi dard hoo woh kisi ko khusi ki poetry kase suna sakti hai anyway meri agli poetry sad nahi hoo gih

Sannan · May 25, 2010, 9:26am

Re: Tum bin zindagi me

ok we'll wait for your next poetry .....

Boredman · May 25, 2010, 9:29am

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I shall Surely add some more flavors next time dard1 Inshallah :) waiting for your next poetry !

dard1 · May 25, 2010, 10:29am

Re: Tum bin zindagi me

ok

Boredman · May 25, 2010, 10:41am

:)

Aryaan · May 25, 2010, 12:00pm

Bohat Khoob Dard..:k:

dard1 · May 25, 2010, 12:31pm

Re: Tum bin zindagi me

thanks Aryaan

Mountains · May 25, 2010, 1:13pm

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D1 :k:

dard1 · May 25, 2010, 1:14pm

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thanks yaar

maha_cutest · May 26, 2010, 9:39am

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very painful poetry saira but very nice

dard1 · May 26, 2010, 9:43am

Re: Tum bin zindagi me

thank u maha

alimani786 · May 26, 2010, 6:15pm

Re: Tum bin zindagi me

Phir bhi dua hai meri; har khushi mile tujhko
Kismat me to apni bus tanhai hai

bohot khoob...