Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Zara Dekho…
tumharay bin ye rastay aur ye galiyan
baree barbad lagtee hain
tumharee rah taktee shabname ankhain
bhi ab nashaad lagtee hain

Tumharay chahnay walay
Tumharee rah taktay hain
tumhee ko yaad kartay hain

tumharay dum say jin kochon mein
baharain raqs kartee theen
khushee k rang bhartee theen

unhe kochon mein ab dekho
na ronaq hai na melaa hai
jisay dekho akiala hai

tumhain kho kar humhin dekho
zanjer-e-ghum nay jakra hai
kaee khadshon nay aa kar basabab
he hath pakra hai

Humain aa kar sabhee khadshon say
tum aazaad kar do na
tum har fun k mahir ho
khushi ka tum koi lamha
phir Aijaad kar do na
ye galiyan aur ye rastay
tumhain kho k azurda hain
Tum aoo na!!!
Inhain abaad kar do na

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Re: Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

ohh God..

its amazing piece.. sonia.. tusi chha gaye o.. wakai.. its really very touchy.. beautifully written..

mujhe autograph dedo please.. :$

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Re: Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

LOL Bro...........
Anay walaa aa jaiy ye he baree baat hai..........
Its A fact Amal Amazing poet he nahin Amazing Insaan bhi hai

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Re: Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

yeah.. thats very true.. but mujhe aisa likhna kab aye ga.. :(

Amal jee ko to wakai miss kerta hoon :$

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Re: Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

Ahmer app mujh ay zayada acha likhtay ho Bro:)

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Re: Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

Humain aa kar sabhee khadshon say
tum aazaad kar do na
tum har fun k mahir ho
khushi ka tum koi lamha
phir Aijaad kar do na
ye galiyan aur ye rastay
tumhain kho k azurda hain
Tum aoo na!!!
Inhain abaad kar do na

awesome...:)

Your Clothes
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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

Oh Really???:aq:

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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

baron ko tum nehe kete :cb:

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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

amal bhae a jao sonia ne etne ache nezem lekhe he ap ke liyae:blush:

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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

tum aaa gaee ho tou wo bhi aa jayin gay…
aur ab poem mein mein un ko app nahin likh saktee the…:snooty:

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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

:cb: mere kehne pe he chelte heyn nah wo :halo:

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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

aur nahin tou kya:aq:

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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

me ne to kaha tah amal bahe ko leken wo nehe ae shaed ap ke bat man ke ajen :cb:

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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

may be…

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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

waisay tumhain Poem samajh kaisay aa gaee:faizy:

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Re: Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

koch koch toh semg ate he he ab etne bhe duffer nehe hon :D

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Re: Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

Nice Sonia Ji,

It is superb poem :biggthumb

Lekin sochnay ki baat hy k Amal Sahib abhi tuk kyun nahi puhnchay ???? :(

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Re: Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

wo padel a rehe heyn nah es leye time lege gah :p

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Re: Tum Aoo Na............For Amal

hmm...............
pohanch jayin gay...............

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Re: Tum Aoo Na…For Amal

:smack: Uffff Sonia ji, agar in ka Nick Masoom hay to is ka ye matlab to nahi kay ye khud bhi utni hee … ???///