Tum ajab ho....

_Nazish · August 28, 2003, 12:19am

*Tum ajab ho meri chaaHat ke nasebooN ki tarha
Munsalik ghaM ke tasalsuL ki gungari se
Bekaraari ki agar koi shakaL hoti to woh tuM hote
ya ke bus maiN hota

Tum ajab ho meri ankhon ki tarha
Apni weraNi se baahir ki ba’yabaNi ko takti huee
Aur bheegi huee
Jane kis khadshe maiN gum, soch maiN khoyee huee
Kuch socH kar ghbrayee huee

Tum ajab ho
Mere shehroN ki tarha
Raat ke jage huay
Dhuup maiN kumla’ye huay
Hijar ki rahguzarooN ki tarha
Bal main bal khaye huway
Duur tak chhaee huee
zard ghta’oN ki tarha

Tum ajab ho mere khuwabooN ki tarha
Umr se ujre huay bikhre huay,tarse huay
Tum ajab ho mere nainoN ki tarha
Barse huay, barse huay*

Gemini_the_Great · August 28, 2003, 12:36am

tum waqaye hi ajab ho… aaj yay post karnay ki kiya tuk

Tum ajab ho mere khuwabooN ki tarha
Umr se ujre huay bikhre huay,tarse huay
Tum ajab ho mere nainoN ki tarha
Barse huay, barse huay

^ nice choice :k:

_Nazish · August 28, 2003, 12:40am

tum bhee ajab ho

_Passionate · August 28, 2003, 12:40am

very very very very nice :k:

BanJaraa · August 28, 2003, 3:58am

tum kya, hum kya,, sara zamana hi ajab hai.......oh by the way,,, ghaib hone ka ye tareqa acha hai.... ....

wese very nice post hai aap ki.. :)

Azad · August 28, 2003, 5:39am

hummm

SuraJ · August 28, 2003, 5:51am

well nazish great !

Zakhmi_Umar · August 28, 2003, 10:05am

Re: Tum ajab ho…

wow , gr8 nazish :k: thanx for sharing

tum bhi ajab ho , mien bilkul aisa hi hoo.n

WiseGuy · August 28, 2003, 12:06pm

Bohat khoob ~Nazish~

Amal · August 28, 2003, 3:44pm

bohat khoob ~Nazish~:k:

chand_chehra · August 28, 2003, 5:14pm

beautiful :k:

and congratz

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 28, 2003, 9:23pm

gr8:k:

_Nazish · August 28, 2003, 10:23pm

Thank you everyone.

thanks

MANAN · August 29, 2003, 3:47am

Niceeee:k:

NikamiJano · August 29, 2003, 11:26am

khubsurat and Congratulation.....meethaie khnay kab aien poetry k guppies..:)