Re: tum aik jurm kay waastay mujhay baar baar sazaa na do
I liked the third and fourth sher… :k:
this sher:
waqt ke haathoN haar kar jo phir raha ho dar-badar
jisy justuju ho moat ki usey zindagi ki duwa na do
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reminds me of Iqbal’s
Maut ko samjhaY haiN ghaafiL, ikhtetaam-e-Zindagi
Hai yeh shaam-e-Zindagi, Subha-e-Dawaam-e-Zindagi