dekhey thay khaab tumharay zaroor magar aye humdum suno zara
jo dil ka meet ik baar banay wo dil kay paas hi raha karey
koi humsafar gar raah neiN bhaley manzil apni badal bhi le
jo azeez rakhey tumhay jaan sey usay berukhi sey thukrao mat
koi paas aye to milo usey koi dil ki kahay to suno usay
waqt ke haathoN haar kar jo phir raha ho dar-badar
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AQ
August 13, 2007, 7:41am
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I liked the third and fourth sher… :k:
this sher:
waqt ke haathoN haar kar jo phir raha ho dar-badar
Maut ko samjhaY haiN ghaafiL, ikhtetaam-e-Zindagi
SJ
August 13, 2007, 8:36am
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dekhey thay khaab tumharay zaroor magar aye humdum suno zara
jo dil ka meet ik baar banay wo dil kay paas hi raha karey
koi humsafar gar raah neiN bhaley manzil apni badal bhi le
jo azeez rakhey tumhay jaan sey usay berukhi sey thukrao mat
koi paas aye to milo usey koi dil ki kahay to suno usay
waqt ke haathoN haar kar jo phir raha ho dar-badar
Bhoat Awesome Ghazal hai Shaab…
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Beautiful.. thx for sharing Shabbb
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dekhey thay khaab tumharay zaroor magar aye humdum suno zara tum aik jurm kay waastay mujhay baar baar sazaa na do jo dil ka meet ik baar banay wo dil kay paas hi raha kareyjisay faasloN sey khoof ho usay door jaa ke sadaa na do koi humsafar gar raah neiN bhaley manzil apni badal bhi le to dil sey usko bhulao mat nazar sey us ko giraa na do jo azeez rakhey tumhay jaan sey usay berukhi sey thukrao mat koi khaab bunay gar pyar say to khaak meiN usey mila na do koi paas aye to milo usey koi dil ki kahay to suno usay gar iQraar karey koi pyaar ka to haNsi meiN usko urra na do waqt ke haathoN haar kar jo phir raha ho dar-badar jisy justuju ho moat ki usey zindagi ki duwa na do
**waah ji shab! aap toh bass chhaa gayee haen. this is really great * *
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dekhey thay khaab tumharay zaroor magar aye humdum suno zara
tum aik jurm kay waastay mujhay baar baar sazaa na do
**Bohat Khoob :(**
**Bas ik zara see baat thee lakin tamaam umar**
**wo mujh ko jagnay ke saza day kay so gaya **
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babri
August 13, 2007, 12:09pm
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Its beautiful SHAB
babri
August 13, 2007, 12:10pm
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Bohat Khoob :(
Bas ik zara see baat thee lakin tamaam umar
*wo mujh ko jagnay ke saza day kay so gaya *
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bohat hi acha shair hai TUM_BIN jee.
Re: tum aik jurm kay waastay mujhay baar baar sazaa na do
bohat hi acha shair hai TUM_BIN jee.
Thank you :)
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**jo azeez rakhey tumhay jaan sey usay berukhi sey thukrao mat
wah! great poem
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nice one SHAB JEE.
Sheal
August 13, 2007, 4:13pm
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bohot khoob shab :k:
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very nice :k:
muncho
August 13, 2007, 8:53pm
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***waah ji shab! aap toh bass chhaa gayee haen. this is really great ***
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*um aik jurm kay waastay mujhay baar baar sazaa na do
wohi na wo aisa keoN kartey :( nice sharing :)
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:halo:
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woh kon hai bus ek bar naam bata dain :soldier:
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very nice shab
Very Nice..
shab aur wo bhee hijar waali, chaana tau hay
