got one word.... outstanding!
Gul-e-tasbeeh, there is a simple tale in this beautiful poem.
Shaa'ir baRee saadgee se yeh kehnaa chaa raha hay ke ird gird kee her shay khushee kaa paighaam de rahee hay aur shaa'ir kaa hausla baRhate hue "us" ke aanay kaa ailaan kar rahee hay. Aise maiN agar wo haqeeqatan aa hee jaaye to kyaa baat hay.
I love the "tashbeehaat" in this poem. Jis andaaz se do-lafzauN ko milaa ker aik nayee tashkeel dee gayee hay, you quickly fall in love reading it. I am refering to the following:
-- khuaahishon ki titli
-- chahaton k phool
-- yaad k jugnoo.........
-- aarzoo k taaj mehel,,,
*-- chahton ki nudrat *
-- khushboun ki suoghaten,
-- chaen-o-sukh k deepak
-- chaand ki sajal kirnen,
Simply amazing and magical.
Acha aesi baat hey tou theek hey, but i am still not satisfied ,
anyway thanks:-)