Gul-e-tasbeeh, there is a simple tale in this beautiful poem.
Shaa'ir baRee saadgee se yeh kehnaa chaa raha hay ke ird gird kee her shay khushee kaa paighaam de rahee hay aur shaa'ir kaa hausla baRhate hue "us" ke aanay kaa ailaan kar rahee hay. Aise maiN agar wo haqeeqatan aa hee jaaye to kyaa baat hay.
I love the "tashbeehaat" in this poem. Jis andaaz se do-lafzauN ko milaa ker aik nayee tashkeel dee gayee hay, you quickly fall in love reading it. I am refering to the following:
Gul-e-tasbeeh, there is a simple tale in this beautiful poem.
Shaa'ir baRee saadgee se yeh kehnaa chaa raha hay ke ird gird kee her shay khushee kaa paighaam de rahee hay aur shaa'ir kaa hausla baRhate hue "us" ke aanay kaa ailaan kar rahee hay. Aise maiN agar wo haqeeqatan aa hee jaaye to kyaa baat hay.
I love the "tashbeehaat" in this poem. Jis andaaz se do-lafzauN ko milaa ker aik nayee tashkeel dee gayee hay, you quickly fall in love reading it. I am refering to the following:
-- khuaahishon ki titli
-- chahaton k phool
-- yaad k jugnoo.........
-- aarzoo k taaj mehel,,,
*-- chahton ki nudrat *
-- khushboun ki suoghaten,
-- chaen-o-sukh k deepak
-- chaand ki sajal kirnen,
Simply amazing and magical.
Acha aesi baat hey tou theek hey, but i am still not satisfied ,
anyway thanks:-)
khushboun ki suoghaten,
chaen-o-sukh k deepak bhi.. huslon ki soorat men,,, saath saath hen mery... muskuraati ye kalyaan, shabnami si baarish men kuch sadaaen deti hen. chaand ki sajal kirnen, chaar soo ye bikhry rang kuch payaam dety hen... tum agar ju aajaa...,raasty chamak jaaen....!!
Wah
Umda Sharing
Rawaani Mein Kahien Kahien Kammi hAi
Us Pey Dhyaan Dien tO Theak hO Saktii hAi
Baaqi Nazam Achii hAi
Likhtii Rahiye
I love the imagery and spirit of it. keep it up :k:
