tum aao to sahi

Jhanjharewali · June 27, 2007, 11:42pm

*for everyone especially aabla_pa bcos he liked it

tum ko hum dil mein basa lenge, tum aao to sahi
saari duniya se chupa lenge tum aao to sahi

ek waada karo ab humse na bichdoge kabhi
naaz hum saare utha lenge tum aao toh sahi

bewafa bhi ho sitamgar bhi jafa pesha bhi
hum khuda tumko bana lenge tum aao to sahi

raah taarikh hae aur dour hae manzil lekin
dard ki shamma jala lenge tum aao to sahi

decent_Felow · June 28, 2007, 12:17am

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wow Lobly ...mushkil sa nam wali behen :)

abeeha · June 28, 2007, 12:26am

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its sooooooo nice....!

being_lonely · June 28, 2007, 1:48am

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Aa gaye hain itnay din gayab raha no 1 missed me :tear3:

Muslim_girl_1 · June 28, 2007, 2:34am

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^ mera bhi apne bare mein yehi khayal hai!!
P.S. nice poem…keep it up:k:

aabla_pa · June 28, 2007, 6:52am

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Thanx Jhanjhars.
I really appreciate that.
Its a nice poem indeed:k:

babri · June 28, 2007, 7:36am

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Very nice poem JW. Great.

deadsoul · June 28, 2007, 7:40am

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buhat khob JW

tahreem_saeed · June 28, 2007, 8:27am

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is line main kuch aisee baat hai jo main samjhti hoon muslim honey k natey humein nahi bolna chahey koi b khuda nahi ban sakta sawey Allah k i hope bura nahi manein gee aap Jw

hum khuda tumko bana lenge tum aao to sahi
baki sari achi hai nice***

aabla_pa · June 28, 2007, 11:47am

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majazi khuda k baaray aapka kya khayaal hai? ;)

tahreem_saeed · June 28, 2007, 11:58am

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yahan majazi khuda kaa naam to nahi aaya

deadsoul · June 28, 2007, 12:00pm

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ya tehreem u r rite
aise batain bolni bhinahi chahye

bheegiyaad · June 28, 2007, 12:35pm

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^ agreed
apart from that its nice

Jhanjharewali · June 28, 2007, 1:31pm

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mere dost phir bhi nahi samjhen:bummer: .

its not literally “khuda” tahreem saheba and dead soul and bheegiyaad. sirf ik shiddat ka ehsaas hae. ke wo unhe apni duniya ka sab kuch maante haen- ISS purre qainaat ki nahi .
maene bura nahi mana doston magar zara afsos huwa aap logon ke soch par.
khair.

Jhanjharewali · June 28, 2007, 1:34pm

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abeeha, MG, decent (its jhanjharewali naaa!), saven, aabla_pa, thanks for appreciaitng.
dead soul, taheem, bheegiyaad aap doston ka bhi thank u.
sid i thought u were on holiday in Baloch ;)

SJ · June 28, 2007, 5:15pm

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very nice :)