~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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** Haath utha k ye dua maang raha hon k tumse mulaaqaat ho,aik main
hoon aik tum ho aur khaamossh tanha raat ho.Meethi methi baatain hon aur haathon main haath hon aur
jis din aaisa ho wohi meri eid wohi shab e baraat ho,mudaat baad ay khuda tujhe se yehi ik dua maang
raha hoon,apnay aangan ki bahaar maang raha hon.
Woh aaya to magar, lehroon ki maanind duur samandar paar chala gya
aur main saahil ki tarah khaali haath reh gya aur mere paas sirf uski yaadon ki parchaiaan hain jin say
lipata hoon to to ye aankhain askhbaar ho jaati hain,ay khuda tujh se apnay dil ka karaar maang raha hoon.
Shaam k saaye gehray hotay he ghar ko loot aata hon aur apnay
kamray main band ho kar takiyay k neechay say teri tasveer nikaalta hoon to meri aankhon se aansnu
nikal kar teri tasveer ko nam kartay hain to tere tasawur main gum ho kar usi lamhay chupkay say
teri tasveer per lab rakhta hon to jaana tasawur main tere sabh aansu poonch daalta hoon,ay khuda tujh
se apnay aansuoon ka ikhtasaar maang raha hoon.
Teri judaai ka safar itna taveel hi k chaltay chaltay mere paaon suuj
jaate hain per jaana teri tamana mein main apna har dard bhool jata hoon aur aur loog kehte hain umeed
per duniya kaaiyam hi to issi aas k saharay jiye jaa raha hoon,ay khuda tu he bata ik apnay
meboob ki kurbat ki siwa,tujh se kya beshumaar maang raha hoon?.**

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

ab parhnay mein kuch tou assani ho gi:-) well ager isko mukhtasar alfaaz mein likhtey aur matlab bhi wazeh ho jaata tab poem mazeed achi ho jaati...anyhow keep trying,and thanks for sharing.

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

thx but it is not a nazm for ur kind info its a short tehreer ya wotever jo bhi keh lain n thx for writting it in dat manner n 1 thing k i am not a poet and not will be u say keep tryin but dear u know k shair hota hi banta koi nahi aur jo banta hi woh farhat A SHAH jaisa hota hi.:)

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

BUhat umda,,,,likha hai,, lonely ji

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

Bohat khoooooob.........:biggthumb

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

Is this is urdu, could you write it in english please.

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

THX SARA I AM NOTHING:)

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

THX AAINA N PAKI :)

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

Wow ! that too gud BL really,specially these lines,

**“per duniya kaaiyam hi to issi aas k saharay jiye jaa raha hoon,ay khuda tu he bata ik apnay
meboob ki kurbat ki siwa,tujh se kya beshumaar maang raha hoon?”:bb:

**

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

eh? :konfused:

i thought this section was ‘sho’ara-e-gupshup’? aren’t you suppose to post shairi here?

p.s. being lonely :emmy: where have you gone buddy? long time no see in shoa’ra-e-gupshup? yaar kuch share karo… sub purany log aahista aahista ghaeb hotay jaa rahy hain

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

Thanks Abeeha :shireen:

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

Yahan dhuul urrti hai aak kal sanaaton ka raaj hai to aik aur tanha ruuh ko yahan bula rahe ho chacha :hehe:

Yaar poetic prose hai ye jis mein shayari ki bandishein nahi hoti but kareeb kareeb aap usay azaad shayari keh sakte hain !

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

Kya khoob Tehreer hai sId..:k:

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

nazam achhi hy..............likhny ka andaaz nazam jesa nahin..kiya frhat . A . S ki hy ?

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

Its not nazm yaar :) aur F.A.S ka naam kam se kam mere saamnay mat he lijiye :ASA:

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Re: ~tujhse ay khuda maang raha hon~TEHREER

bahoot umda