Tujhe Pyaar MEra SAtaye ga

Nain · June 17, 2013, 7:08pm

Tujhe pyaar mera sataye ga
yaadun ke tofaan uthey ga

Mera naam lihk ker kitabun main
tu logun ke dar sey mitaye ga

Ziker mera akser kerne se pheley
tu kuch soch ker muskuraye ga

baatein meri yaad ayein gi
jitna tu unhey bhulaye ga

tera dil mujhe ko dehkna bhi chahey
tu nazrun ko phir bhi jhukhaye ga

Jis ne mujhe itna sataya hai
Us ka chain bhi koi churaye ga

Diva · June 18, 2013, 12:29am

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:)

Nain · June 18, 2013, 10:00am

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ye mou le ker cafe main jayein

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Diva · June 18, 2013, 10:06am

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Meray muunh mein aesqa kya hai ?!?! bhoojo tou janein

Nain · June 18, 2013, 10:16am

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app asia karein PA main chali jayein wahan ye mou zayda suitee karey ga :D

Diva · June 18, 2013, 10:21am

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Hanstey muskuratey loag tou berdasht he nahin

Microbian · June 18, 2013, 10:23am

Bachy aisi poetry ni share krty

Nain · June 18, 2013, 10:24am

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ye mouskurana hai :)…>

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Nain · June 18, 2013, 10:27am

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bachey ko mod kis ne banaya hai

Microbian · June 18, 2013, 10:37am

Is liye kunk phir aap ny rona tha

Nain · June 18, 2013, 10:40am

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main ney tu ussi waqt sun ke hi goli maar li thi

cutenice62 · June 18, 2013, 10:43am

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:( poetry pay koi comment nahi karta sb discussion shoro kar detay hain....what MODS are doing i dont know, this type of mukalma only be allowed in TImepass only, every thread is treated non seriously...

Nain · June 18, 2013, 10:49am

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abhi itni age nahi huyi hai

this type of mukalma only be allowed in TImepass only ye kahan likha hai

App tu serious hu gaye

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cutenice62 · June 18, 2013, 10:53am

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Ji bilkul, is liyay kion k is forum may shamoliyat ki waja yehi hai k dosray loag kaisay shairi ko samjhtay hain kaisay mukhtalif andaaz say sochtay hain ta k baqi loag sekh sakain mahsoos kar sakain k chezon ko dekhnay k kitnay andaaz or kitnay pehlu hain…lakin bohat afsoos say kehna parta hai k yahan yeh sab khatam hota ja raha hai…

Nain · June 18, 2013, 11:02am

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nah bilkul nahi

sab hanstey kheltey sehk rahey hain…shairun ki gherayun main jaker hi baat sey bat nikalti hai ..tu maza dobala hu jata hai

wese batun sey lag raha hai ke app shair hain

cutenice62 · June 18, 2013, 11:05am

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mera zaati khayal or mushahida yeh hai k shairon ki gehrai may tu abhi tak may nay kisi ko jatay nahi dekha…kiya aap dikha sakain gi…may nay khud nay mozo-e-guftago say hat k raye dien hain kai threads may…so unko edit bhi kiya beth k…
nahi may shair nahi hoon…

Nain · June 18, 2013, 11:18am

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Merey Aieb mujhe ungliyun pey ginwao Dost

Bus mujhe meri ghair moujodgi main bora na kehna

cutenice62 · June 18, 2013, 11:22am

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theek hai.... tangain bazoo tooti hoi hain is shair ki fariha

Nain · June 18, 2013, 11:26am

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..bataye kya toota hua hai is main

cutenice62 · June 18, 2013, 11:39am

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“mujhe meri ghair moujodgi main” seems like a nasr-paraa