Tujhe khoob ye hunar he .. mujhe paash paash karna !

Lamhay · August 11, 2002, 3:13pm

mera saans rokna phir .. mere dil ki laash karna
tujhe khoob ye hunar hai .. mujhe paash paash karna

ae tabeeb ! mangta hi main raha wafa ka marham
tera kaam bas jalaana .. mera dil kharaash karna

hai ajeeb teri ulfat .. teri la ubaliyaan bhi
mere raaz sun ke mujhse .. mere raaz faash karna

teri bijliyaan jafa ki.. mere dil pe gir chuki hain
mein to khaak ho chuka hooN na mujhe talaash karna

tere wasl ki tamanna .. meri aarzo-e qurbat
howa kargar na Sagar .. tera kaash kaash karna

Aj phir dil nay Ek Tamana ki,
Aj phir dil ko hum nay samjhaya..!

system · August 11, 2002, 3:25pm

Very very good choice.

Hum_Hain · August 11, 2002, 3:58pm

bahut achi hai!

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Amal · August 11, 2002, 6:15pm

Bohat khoob Lamhay

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Aalhan · August 11, 2002, 6:21pm

Amazing!

Who's the poet?

SunnyBoy · August 12, 2002, 2:58am

Buhat khoob

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Lamhay · August 12, 2002, 6:06am

[quote]
Originally posted by Aalhan:
Amazing!

Who's the poet?
[/quote]

Anonymous !

thanks pakbeast,Hum hain, Amal ,Aalhan and sunny boy!

nikii · August 12, 2002, 7:40am

zabardastttttttt

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GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 12, 2002, 7:46am

Beautiful Lamhay:~)

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kya Lutf anjuman ka jab DiL hi bujh geya ho~
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~kya Nazar dain jo koi Naie ArZoO karain
DiL mey tou Tootne kie bhie Himmat nahin rahi~

Rabia_Chaudhry · August 12, 2002, 2:22pm

URS POEM IS VERY GOOD,…!!!

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Rabia Chaudhry

BholiBhali · August 12, 2002, 6:45pm

tere wasl ki tamanna .. meri aarzo-e qurbat
howa kargar na Sagar .. tera kaash kaash karna

Excellent...

Aalhan · August 12, 2002, 7:19pm

I know I've commented on
it already, but couldn't
resist re-reading it.

mera saans rokna phir .. mere dil ki laash karna
tujhe khoob ye hunar hai .. mujhe paash paash karna

Whoever the poet may be
the words speak out to
the reader. Marvelous!

Perfectionist · August 12, 2002, 7:30pm

Wah zabardast ghazal hai lamhay

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Pehalwan · August 14, 2002, 6:23am

Re: Tujhe khoob ye hunar he .. mujhe paash paash karna !

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
**mera saans rokna phir .. mere dil ki laash karna
tujhe khoob ye hunar hai .. mujhe paash paash karna

ae tabeeb ! mangta hi main raha wafa ka marham
tera kaam bas jalaana .. mera dil kharaash karna

hai ajeeb teri ulfat .. teri la ubaliyaan bhi
mere raaz sun ke mujhse .. mere raaz faash karna

teri bijliyaan jafa ki.. mere dil pe gir chuki hain
mein to khaak ho chuka hooN na mujhe talaash karna

tere wasl ki tamanna .. meri aarzo-e qurbat
howa kargar na Sagar .. tera kaash kaash karna

Aj phir dil nay Ek Tamana ki,
Aj phir dil ko hum nay samjhaya..! **
[/QUOTE]

Wah g wah bohat khoob ....
maza aagaya ..
Lamhay !
Aap ki ajazat say iss gazal ka urdu version main nay img gal. main post kiya hay

Lamhay · August 15, 2002, 5:02pm

Re: Re: Tujhe khoob ye hunar he .. mujhe paash paash karna !

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Pehalwan: *
*

Wah g wah bohat khoob ....
maza aagaya ..
Lamhay !
Aap ki ajazat say iss gazal ka urdu version main nay img gal. main post kiya hay **
[/QUOTE]

Ijazaat say main nay kab ijazaat di aur ap nay kab pocha ijazat mangi thee pehalwan g?

Nayab · August 15, 2002, 5:04pm

Lamhay jee humesha ki tarha bohot khoob....:)

Lamhay · August 20, 2002, 4:16pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Nayab: *
Lamhay jee humesha ki tarha bohot khoob....:)
[/QUOTE]

thanks nayab !

Sohaib · August 20, 2002, 9:00pm

good..
bohut khoob

ASA · August 21, 2002, 5:29am

Re: Tujhe khoob ye hunar he .. mujhe paash paash karna !

tere wasl ki tamanna .. meri aarzo-e qurbat
howa kargar na Sagar .. tera kaash kaash karna

zabardast....... kya kehne