tujhay kiya khabar tujhay kiya patta…

Ali_2 · February 10, 2008, 6:25pm

mairay bay-khabar tujhay kiya patta
teri aarzuoon kay dosh per
teri kaifiyyat kay jaam main
mai jo kitni sadyon say qaid hoon
teray naqsh mai tairay naam main
mairay khuwaab meri kahaaniyaan
mairay laikh ki yeh nishaaniyaan
teri chaah mai hay ruki huwi
kabhi aansuoon ki qataar mai
kabhi patheron kay hisaar main
kabhi dasht-e-hijr ki raat main
kabhi bad-naseebi ki ghaat main
kai rang dhoop say jall gaey
kai chaand shaakh say dhal gaey
kai tan sulag kay pighal gaey
teri ulfaton kay qayaam main
teray dard kay der-o-baam mai
koi kab say sabt-e-saleeb hay
tujhay kiya khabar tujhay kiya patta…

Dushwari · February 10, 2008, 6:28pm

Re: tujhay kiya khabar tujhay kiya patta…

very nice nazm, Ali_

thanks for sharing.
whose is it?

best,
Dushwari

muncho · February 10, 2008, 7:22pm

Re: tujhay kiya khabar tujhay kiya patta…

khaak ho jaein gaay usko khabar honay tuk;
bahut aala g.

Koyal · February 11, 2008, 3:07am

Re: tujhay kiya khabar tujhay kiya patta…

one of ma fav and me ko sab pata hia :p

Shab-e-Hijar · February 11, 2008, 3:43am

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Beautiful ...

redidentity · February 11, 2008, 4:42am

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khoob..

muddii · February 11, 2008, 6:37am

Re: tujhay kiya khabar tujhay kiya patta…

Nice one:)

bheegiyaad · February 11, 2008, 12:08pm

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nice :k:

Aryaan · February 11, 2008, 1:50pm

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Bohat khoob Ali…:k:

Shumaisa · February 15, 2008, 5:36am

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V. Nice Ali..

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 15, 2008, 10:26am

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Nice:)

hiba_no.1 · February 15, 2008, 12:26pm

Re: tujhay kiya khabar tujhay kiya patta…

v nice