tujhaY kia khabaR meRi raah maiN koi taRa, jugnoo, dee'ya nahi

Koyal · September 10, 2004, 12:45am

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meray mah-o-saal k beach maiN koi aisaa lamha gay’aa nahi
teRa naam maiN ne lee’aa nahi tujhaY yaad maiN ne kia nahi

teRa koN sa wo madaaR tha jahaN gaR’dashaiN meRi ruk gaa’ee
teRa koN sa wo kahyal tha jisaY maiN ne damaN dee’ya nahi

meRa safaR adhoRa he rah gay’aa mujhaY manziloN ka pata nahi
maiN humsafaR isay maana tha kabhi saath jis ne dee’ya nahi

yahaN haR qadam pe haiN haadsaY ye khayal he dil ko thaka gay’aa
ye safaR k see’raat-e-taaveel hai abhi aik qadam taak utha nahi

ye meRi Ana ki hai sirkashi jo wasaf aisaY sikha gaa’ee
maiN dar’yaa hooN jo giRa nahi wo pahaR hooN jo hila nahi

koi aik aa’nsoo aisa day daR-o-baam apnaY saja looN maiN
tujhaY kia khabaR meRi raah maiN koi taRa, jugnoo, dee’ya nahi

koi be-qaRari se aaj be meray dil maiN khaaR hai khenchti
koi daRd tha jo daba nahi koi aansoo tha jo baha nahi

isay baad baRsooN k dekh k yuuhi aik lamhaY ko kia huwa
koi saans thei jo chali nahi koi zabat hai jo huwa nahi

Pramod · September 10, 2004, 3:47am

** Koyal **,

Your taste of poetry is always great. You have posted number of beautiful ghazals which I read first time. this beautiful piece is also one of them. thanks for it.
I would be obliged if you could let me know the shaayar's name too.

Thanks once again.

chand_chehra · September 10, 2004, 3:50am

Beautiful :k:

Zakhmi_Umar · September 10, 2004, 5:18am

Re: tujhaY kia khabaR meRi raah maiN koi taRa, jugnoo, dee’ya nahi

Buhat khoob :k: thanx for sharing

SunnyBoy · September 10, 2004, 8:13am

Nice :k:

Saqi_the_angel · September 10, 2004, 8:55am

Koyal Ji,

Bhaut Khoobsurat ghazal hai. Janab humsafar koi dekh ke chunana tha na, Yeh hamsafar kaisa chun liya jis aap ka sath kabhi diya nahin. Aik baat hai jo bhee ghazal post karti hai aik se bar kar aik hoti hai.
meRa safaR adhoRa he rah gay'aa mujhaY manziloN ka pata nahi
maiN humsafaR isay maana tha kabhi saath jis ne dee'ya nahi

Ainda keliyeh hamsafar dekh ke chuniyeh ga!!!!
Saqi

Pyara_sa_doost · September 10, 2004, 10:12am

Re: tujhaY kia khabaR meRi raah maiN koi taRa, jugnoo, dee'ya nahi

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

**

meray mah-o-saal k beach maiN koi aisaa lamha gay'aa nahi
teRa naam maiN ne lee'aa nahi tujhaY yaad maiN ne kia nahi

teRa koN sa wo madaaR tha jahaN gaR'dashaiN meRi ruk gaa'ee
teRa koN sa wo kahyal tha jisaY maiN ne damaN dee'ya nahi

meRa safaR adhoRa he rah gay'aa mujhaY manziloN ka pata nahi
maiN humsafaR isay maana tha kabhi saath jis ne dee'ya nahi

yahaN haR qadam pe haiN haadsaY ye khayal he dil ko thaka gay'aa
ye safaR k see'raat-e-taaveel hai abhi aik qadam taak utha nahi

ye meRi Ana ki hai sirkashi jo wasaf aisaY sikha gaa'ee
maiN dar'yaa hooN jo giRa nahi wo pahaR hooN jo hila nahi

koi aik aa'nsoo aisa day daR-o-baam apnaY saja looN maiN
tujhaY kia khabaR meRi raah maiN koi taRa, jugnoo, dee'ya nahi

koi be-qaRari se aaj be meray dil maiN khaaR hai khenchti
koi daRd tha jo daba nahi koi aansoo tha jo baha nahi

isay baad baRsooN k dekh k yuuhi aik lamhaY ko kia huwa
koi saans thei jo chali nahi koi zabat hai jo huwa nahi

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hmm bohat hi deep and bohat hi achi gahzal he bohat kuhb gr8 stuff koyal keep sharing:)

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:)

tata:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 10, 2004, 10:24am

*isay baad baRsooN k dekh k yuuhi aik lamhaY ko kia huwa
koi saans thei jo chali nahi koi zabat hai jo huwa nahi
*

Beautiful shair..:k: infact poorii ghazal hee khobsurat hai :k:.. tareef k liye alfaz kum per gaye hien

thanks for sharin koyal lovely collection

WiseGuy · September 10, 2004, 1:07pm

Nice! :)

Daagh · September 11, 2004, 2:39am

bahot khoob Koyal jee :)

nice to read your post after a long long time :D

cuteepie · September 11, 2004, 2:56am

:k:

ullujii · September 11, 2004, 6:17pm

CUBIS say furst mil gye :-|

system · September 11, 2004, 7:50pm

beautiful :k:

Koyal · September 13, 2004, 12:00am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Pramod: *
* Koyal **,

Your taste of poetry is always great. You have posted number of beautiful ghazals which I read first time. this beautiful piece is also one of them. thanks for it.
I would be obliged if you could let me know the shaayar's name too.

Thanks once again.
[/QUOTE]

shukria prem g bus zara nawazi hai ap ki warna bandi kis qabil..:)

Koyal · September 13, 2004, 12:02am

shukria anday janday raha karo Chand g ..

Koyal · September 13, 2004, 12:04am

Re: Re: tujhaY kia khabaR meRi raah maiN koi taRa, jugnoo, dee’ya nahi

thanks ZU…

Koyal · September 13, 2004, 12:05am

Koyal · September 13, 2004, 12:08am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Saqi_the_angel: *
Koyal Ji,

Bhaut Khoobsurat ghazal hai. Janab humsafar koi dekh ke chunana tha na, Yeh hamsafar kaisa chun liya jis aap ka sath kabhi diya nahin. Aik baat hai jo bhee ghazal post karti hai aik se bar kar aik hoti hai.
meRa safaR adhoRa he rah gay'aa mujhaY manziloN ka pata nahi
maiN humsafaR isay maana tha kabhi saath jis ne dee'ya nahi

Ainda keliyeh hamsafar dekh ke chuniyeh ga!!!!
Saqi
[/QUOTE]

ohh aienda se ap se pooch lay ghi..:p

K_Khan · September 13, 2004, 12:23am

Re: tujhaY kia khabaR meRi raah maiN koi taRa, jugnoo, dee’ya nahi

Saqi_the_angel · September 13, 2004, 8:32am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

ohh aienda se ap se pooch lay ghi..:p
[/QUOTE]

KiyouN nahiN Janab,

Khadim to hazir hai mashwaray keliyeh. Aur sunaiNkiya haal haiN???

Saqi