tujhaY kai khabaR meRi arzoo tu basi huwi hai kidheR kidheR

tujhaY kai khabaR meRi arzoo tu basi huwi hai kidheR kidheR
tu hai mast apnaY khayal maiN meRay haal ki tujhaY kia khabaR

kabhi a gaye meray dil maiN tu rahi apnaY haal se be-khabaR
meRay jism-o-jaaN maiN bikhaR gaye mujhY khud se kar dya bekhabaR

kabhi raach gaye kabhi bus gaye meRi rooh maiN tu uteR gaye
kabhi faiz-e-jalwa taRaz se tu bana gaye mujhaY ba-asaR

meRay zoaq maiN be neha hai tu meRay shooq maiN be ayaN hai tu
kabhi jalwa rukh-e-yaaR se mujhaY khud se kaR dya be-khabaR

kabhi a gaye meRay zahaN maiN kabhi ghaR kia meray qalab maiN
kabhi kaR dya mujhaY ba’khabaR kabhi kaR gaye mujhaY be-khabaR

meRi aRzoo meRi justaju kabhi muj se ho jo tu roobaRoo
maiN ye pochoN meRay sanam pe ku nahi ho saka teRa kuch asaR

hai (,) ka dil muztarib isi fikaR maiN isi sooch maiN
tujhay choR day kisi raah pe ya bana he laY tujhay hamsafaR

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NikamiJi aap ney pots ki hey to yaqeenan zabardast hi ho gi...lekin frankly speaking mujhey to kuch samajh nahi aaya....gustaakhi maaf :(

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Amal Saheeb pata tha ap ki samj main kam kam he aiey ghi isi leay likhi jis ko samjana hia wohi samjay baqie…:wink: :wink: :blush:
so worry nat har baat ka… kher chaly janay dijiey keep smilling :slight_smile:

very Nice NJ sis ,shukar hay i understand :) thanks for sharing !

meRay zoaq maiN be neha hai tu meRay shooq maiN be ayaN hai tu
kabhi jalwa rukh-e-yaaR se mujhaY khud se kaR dya be-khabaR

thats nice!
Amal itni mushkil tu naahi hay, i think it is as some one talking to oneself may be or can u imagine a sitution when someone closing his/her eyes and thinking abt him/her self as some one has been fighting with oneself aur thora tired and keep thinkinggg.....
well my own guess kay khuch aysa hee hay iss poem main, reality tu i dont know na :)

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jano gi very nice like alwayz :k:

but bekhabar aur bakhabar nay kuch :confused: kardiya

bhut khoob :k:
:slight_smile: nikami siso :slight_smile:

Amjad bhai is qadar fehm-o-faraasat hamaarey hissey
mein bhi aai hoti to aaj hamaara shumaar bhi naazreen-e-majlis
ki tarhaN ashaab-e-daanish-o-beenish meiN na ho raha hota?
Hum to pehley hi keh chukey heiN ke NikamiJi ney ye
ghazal post ki hey to ye YAQEENAN zabardast hi ho gi :slight_smile: bas dukh
to is baat ka hey ke ye hameiN samajh nahi aai…:teary1: Kheir…
hum is gustaakhi ke leeye to pehley hi muaaz’rat peish kar
chukey heiN…:slight_smile:

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Yeh itne bekhabar log?
Buhat khoobsurat poem hai nikii :k:

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very Nice NJ sis ,shukar hay i understand :) thanks for sharing !
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thanks G-e-Tea k ap ko KISI arzo ki samj a gaye ....:)

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*Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *
meRay zoaq maiN be neha hai tu meRay shooq maiN be ayaN hai tu
kabhi jalwa rukh-e-yaaR se mujhaY khud se kaR dya be-khabaR

thats nice!
Amal itni mushkil tu naahi hay, i think it is as some one talking to oneself may be or can u imagine a sitution when someone closing his/her eyes and thinking abt him/her self as some one has been fighting with oneself aur thora tired and keep thinkinggg.....
well my own guess kay khuch aysa hee hay iss poem main, reality tu i dont know na :)
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Amjad bahi apni apni smaj ki baat hia ab Amal ko nahi samj aiye tu it;s ok na..zarori nahi har chez samj main a he jaiey....ab har koi hamarey bahi ki tarha samrt thori na ..:)

tanks chando g...nikii sis........capo and Azam.....:)

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mughei achei terha khaber hei nikami je :):)
:k: nice

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bhut khoob:k:

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but Mahsoom g ap ko kia khabar :slight_smile: aur kesay khabar..:slight_smile:

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thanks jL…:slight_smile:

wonderful nikami sis its really gr8!!

hai (,) ka dil muztarib isi fikaR maiN isi sooch maiN
tujhay choR day kisi raah pe ya bana he laY tujhay hamsafaR

wah..bahot hi achha sher hai, bahna.
thanks for sharing it here.

Gr8 :)