tujh pe guzare na qayaamat shab-e-tanhaai kee

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

ehsan March 17, 2007, 11:32am 1

koo-ba-koo phail gaee baat shanaasaaee kee
us ne Khushbuu kee tarah meri paziraai kee

**kaise kah doon kay mujhe chhor diyaa hai us ne
baat to sach hai magar baat hai ruswaae kee

woh kahin bhee gayaa lautaa to mere paas aayaa
bas yehee baat hai achchhi mere harajaai kee
**
teraa pahalu tere dil kee tarah abad rahe
tujh pe guzare na qayaamat shab-e-tanhaai kee

us ne jalati hui peshaani pe jo haath rakhaa
ruh tak aa gai taasir masihaai kee

SJ March 17, 2007, 12:19pm 2

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Nice ghazal!............thanx for sharing!

fghd March 17, 2007, 1:23pm 3

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koo-ba-koo? whats that?

chour bhi diya and yet he still came back
phir chora tou na huwa

ehsan March 17, 2007, 3:25pm 4

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yeh batain bachoon kee samajh say bahar hain. Jao ja kar Barbie, Barbie khelo.

Pathani March 17, 2007, 3:38pm 5

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Kaise keh doon kay mujhe chhor diya hai us ne
Baat to sach hai magar baat hai ruswaii ki.....

Its one of my fav. ghazal, may Allahjee grant Parveen Shakir
Jannatul Firdoos, ameen. As a modern Urdu poet, she really
knew how to recite her ghazals in very delicate way.....

hiba_no.1 March 17, 2007, 4:13pm 6

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v nice

Asma_Farhan March 17, 2007, 4:16pm 7

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It means gali gali ya koocha koocha, that makes it: Her taraf!

Asma_Farhan March 17, 2007, 4:20pm 8

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Beautiful ghazal by Perveen Shakir. thanx for sharing!

Minerva March 18, 2007, 8:30am 9

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nice:)`

AQ March 18, 2007, 9:19am 10

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Uss nay jootaY say ik roz jo pazeerayee kee:blush:
Dil maiN hasrat na rahi shanaasaayee kee

Cheen-O-Japan kee jangouN ka mazaa aataa hay:shikari:
Jub zubaaN chalti hay anthakk meri hamsaayee kee:bukbuk:

**Hosh maiN aatay hee chal daita hay sokan kee taraf
Buss yehi baat buri hay meraY harjaayee kee!!!
**
Main nay becha thaa paRrosi ka churaa kar teetar!
Fees School maiN mujhay dainee thee Bhai kee!

Buss yehi kuch hay yahaaN ahl-e-siyaasat ka tareeq!!
Fatiha daada kee, dukaan hay halwaayee kee!

AQ March 18, 2007, 9:23am 11

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umm i may be wrong but in the first misrah, word 'jo' was 'jub' if I remember it correctly

And, you are missing one more :p

ab bhee barsaat kee raatoN maiN badan TooT-ta hai
jaag uthtee haiN ajab khuwaahishaiN angRaayi kee :D

being_lonely March 19, 2007, 11:29pm 12

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bohat umda eshan bhaii !!!

NikamiJano March 20, 2007, 2:17pm 13

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NikamiJano March 20, 2007, 2:17pm 14

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nice one ehsan g

\\ ** .. New Guppy .. ** //

AQ March 20, 2007, 2:32pm 15

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ziadah aankhaiN naa ghumaaiye

That sher was part of the poem …

Tukk Tukk deedum, damm naa kasheedum :halo:

fghd March 20, 2007, 2:55pm 16

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meray paas bohut acha jawaab hai .. but doun gi nahee :p

\\ ** .. New Guppy .. ** //

AQ March 20, 2007, 3:20pm 17

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Darpok!!!

fghd March 20, 2007, 3:33pm 18

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^ is ko barouN ka aDub kehtaiN haiN :chocolate milk:

AQ March 20, 2007, 3:37pm 19

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chocolate milk was a wrong icon ..

fghd March 20, 2007, 3:38pm 20

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no idher chocolate milk hi chahyeh