Tujh ko dekha

_ksa_kuri · October 15, 2005, 3:46am

Re: Tujh ko dekha

original hai..

Jaan_Lewaa · October 15, 2005, 3:54am

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theek hai lakin y u ruinin da threa:smash:

ImranQ · October 15, 2005, 2:11pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

tujh ko dekha tou khayal aya
taray pass hatora kahaN say aya

blackforest_360 · October 15, 2005, 3:11pm

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tujko dekha tou yeh khayal aya
yaar isna tou dhotti pani hai
yeh or ksa ke shaddi honai wali hai

mubaruk ho meri mattai kaha hai

;p

ImranQ · October 15, 2005, 5:23pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

tujh ko dekha tou khayal aya
tera sahir meri samajh mai nahi aaya

_Pagli · October 15, 2005, 5:31pm

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tujhko dekha tu yeh khayal aaya
khayaal anay wala the magar ana bhool gaya

ImranQ · October 15, 2005, 5:39pm

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tujhko dekha tu yeh khayal aaya
insano kay dase mai parizaad kahan sai aae

_Pagli · October 15, 2005, 5:54pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

tera sher parha tu yeh khayal aaya
tujhay tu muzakkar aur moa'nnass ka farq bhi nahee maloom
mein parizaadi ho sakti hoon, ya phir shahzaadi
tu ne kiyun mujhay "parizaad" bataya????

ImranQ · October 15, 2005, 6:01pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

tujhko dekha tu yeh khayal aaya
meri galti urdu grammer ko samajh nahi paya
kehna chah raha tha moa'nnass
zubaN say muzakkar nikal aya

_Pagli · October 15, 2005, 6:12pm

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ok...enough of khayalaat now....change kafiya and radeef....next sher shouldnt be starting w/ "tujhko"...and shouldnt be ending w/ "aaya"

ImranQ · October 15, 2005, 6:21pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

kabhi kabhi meray dil mai khayal aata hai
kay jaisay tujh ko banaya gaya hai meray liay :)

blackforest_360 · October 15, 2005, 6:30pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

tujhey dehka tou yeh khayal aya
ke aaj yeh bohat handsome lugra hai

;P

ImranQ · October 15, 2005, 6:53pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

tujhey dehka tou yeh khayal aya
aaj yeah churail bhi bhoot lag rahi hai

_Pagli · October 15, 2005, 6:54pm

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yeah thats good…but i dint have anything to say in return…my head is spinning now.

insan · October 15, 2005, 6:58pm

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mey abhi thak is ko nhai dehk paya kiya zulm hey mugha per

ImranQ · October 15, 2005, 7:01pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

kabhi kabhi meray dil mai khayal aata hai
itni serious thread kay baat sar mai chakkar hi aata hai

_Pagli · October 15, 2005, 7:07pm

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nahee yeh thread nahee meri bhook ka kamaal hai
no dinner and no sehri + fasting…i m dizzy:rotato:

ImranQ · October 15, 2005, 7:16pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

bhook say bura haal hai
kia tairay pass roumal hai
usay gheela kar lai aur
apnay sar pay daal lay

_ksa_kuri · October 15, 2005, 7:56pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

tujhe deakha to khayaal aaya..

blackforest_360 · October 15, 2005, 8:42pm

Re: Tujh ko dekha

oye uncle mainai tuo aap ke compliment kei the
liken aapnai agai sei bastee kerdei:(

koi baat nahi is time maaf ker thei hoo