Kabhi tumharay kaleejay main bhi ik gubaar tha
Kabhi tumhaaray bhaijay main bhi ik chota Shaitaan tha
Kabhi tumhaaray seenay main kathii dakaar ka ik sialaab tha
Kabhi tumhaaray maiday main bara hi jang-o-jadaal tha
Kabhi tumhari ankhoon main nasheela wo ik khumar tha
Kabhi tumhaaray sapnoN main lakhoN haseen lajwaab tha
Kabhi tumharay hathon main UNka wo laal romaal tha
Kabhi tumhari dhoti main bhi bara hi kamaal tha
Kabhi tumharay thobray main kia wo sohna jamaal tha
lekin aaj… wo umdaa imaarat gir chuki,
sirf khado-o-khaal hain baqi
jiss ka hamain kafi malaal tha …
by:
Allama Jinaab Dr(nakaam) and Engineer(kamyaab) Haji Jinaab Ata Khan Sahib Karachi walay…
(fil badi kehnay walay… Takahllus: Sagar Khan Hyderabadi)
Re: -- Tuhmain Yaad hokay na yaad ho... (inspired by Roman-Gernal'vi and then AQ-Cafa'vi)
aap ney jo last time poem post ki thi it was something, iss poem ki humeiN kuch khas samjh nahi lagi ... AQ sey inspire na huwa kareiN:p
Thanks for sharing Ata:-)
Re: – Tuhmain Yaad hokay na yaad ho… (inspired by Roman-Gernal’vi and then AQ-Cafa
Thanks so much Pakeeza Gul, thanking for the comment about the previous nazam of course, and really its some boosting comment, when someone remember something written in past and say nice words even after days, that show the respect really
and about this peom, well, sometime insaan bhi shaitaan ban jaata hay na, not alwyas we can be an angel, so kabhi kabhi to chalta hay :-p
its was something that inspired me from those two threads,
Khair, I will try to write only serious next time, theek ?
tobah meri jo AQ say inspire howa next,
Re: -- Tuhmain Yaad hokay na yaad ho... (inspired by Roman-Gernal'vi and then AQ-Cafa'vi)
Pagal haiN aap... zyada over-acting na kareiN, saaf zaahir ho raha hai :-p Kaunsi threads sey inspire hue haiN aap? Search karney ka mood nahiN ho raha, links please halo
nise nice :k: