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Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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tery bina main jioN kesy teray bina maiN kho jaooN tery bina haar paal hay tanha tery bina maiN maar jaooN tu hay meri pehli chahat tu hay pehli hansi tu hay meri pehli manzil tu hay meri zindhagi tu hay badal tu ghata bhi tu hay meri ashaqi tu samaN bhi tu hay lehrati nadhi aik meri dua hay janam na hona kabhi tum ajnabhi haar adha teri oh janam hay yai kesi saza haseeN tu hay meri hi muhabat tu pehli kaRi tu hay meri hi sharata tu hay meri bandhagi tu hay saya tu diya bhi tu hay paal paal roshani tu hay chandha tu hay shermati kali meray paas aaa mujhay na taRpa ooooooooohoooooooo phir kioN fasalah na rooth ja na na rooth jaaaa tu hay meri pehli chahat tu hay peli hansi tu hay meri pehli manzil tu hay meri zindhagi tu hay badal tu hay ghata bhi tu hay meri ashaqi tu hay qudra tu hay lehrati kali tu hay saya tu hay paal paal roshani tu hay shermati kali tu hay mery dill ka meet

I’m trying to write a poem useing same tune in this song…baan nahiN paa rahi..:frowning:

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Nice,
Itni sari bun tu gayee hai. :)

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very good ........keep it up

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:k:

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wonderful :k:

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zabardast:k:

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very nice :k:

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kiya baan gai?

Aray song hay na meri poem kahaN…

wo to abhi paak rahi:hehe:

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Itna na pakaao jee, kaheen haandi jal na jaye :hehe:

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KahaN hotay ap ajj kaal?

& yes, thanks…

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Thanks all........:)

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lol:hehe:

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nice ....

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by SuraJ: *
nice ....
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Glad 2 c u.....:)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *

Glad 2 c u.....:)
[/QUOTE]

mujhey bhi acha laga kissi ko khushi huwi mujhey dekh kar ..

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by SuraJ: *

mujhey bhi acha laga kissi ko khushi huwi mujhey dekh kar ..
[/QUOTE]

Good good, so where's your sMile?

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very nice

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:smiley:
:smokin:
:stuck_out_tongue:

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meri smile …shaaid koi ley giya :hoonh:

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I'm trying to write a poem useing same tune in this song......baan nahiN paa rahi..

Biryani bana lain ...