~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

system June 12, 2005, 9:01pm 1

** Har shama bujhi rafta rafta, har khuaab luTa dheeray dheeray Sheesha na sahi pather bhi na tha, dil TooT gaya dheeray dheeray

BarsoN maiN marasim bantey haiN, lamhooN maiN bhala kya TooTeiN gey
Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray

Ehsaas hova barbadi ka jub saarey ghar maiN dhool uRii
Aaye hay hamarey aangun maiN pat-jhaR ki havaa dheeray dheeray

Dil kaisey jala, kis waqt jala, hum ko bhi pata aakhir maiN chala
Phaila hay dhowaaN chupkey chupkey, sulgi hay chitaa dheeray dheeray

Woh haath paraaye ho bhi gaye, ab doorr ka rishta hay ~Qaiser~
Aati hay meri tanhaaye maiN khushbo-e-hinna dheeray dheeray

**

HeArT_HaCKeR June 12, 2005, 9:50pm 2

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

Boht khoob

ghazal_kisi_ke June 12, 2005, 10:00pm 3

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

one of my fav .. thanks for sharing :)

Golden_Scorpion_1 June 13, 2005, 6:28am 4

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

Beautiful…

Maheen2002 June 13, 2005, 10:53am 5

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

** Sheesha na sahi pather bhi na tha, dil TooT gaya dheeray dheeray

**** Dil kaisey jala, kis waqt jala, hum ko bhi pata aakhir maiN chala
Phaila hay dhowaaN chupkey chupkey, sulgi hay chitaa dheeray dheeray

Zabardast :-(
**

GuL-e-Tasbeeh June 13, 2005, 12:34pm 6

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

very nice ghazal,thanks for posting:-)

mere kitabi chehre ko

Amal June 13, 2005, 2:45pm 7

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

Beautiful ghazal ***** Vivacious ***** :k: … thanx for sharing with us

nain....

system June 13, 2005, 10:00pm 8

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HH, ghazal, GS, maheen, Gul & Amal Thanks :)

Aryaan June 14, 2005, 2:54am 9

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

Bohat achey Vivacious…

_Masoom_Muskaan June 14, 2005, 8:55am 10

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

nice1 vivooo:) :k:

system June 14, 2005, 8:57am 11

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

Thanks Aryaan & Masoom Muskan :)

Hum_Hain June 14, 2005, 10:39am 12

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

is ke saaray sher badde hi fit hin lol :-}

system June 15, 2005, 8:51pm 13

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

^ thanks :-D

system June 16, 2005, 8:01pm 14

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

Beautiful Viv... thank you for sharing :-)

system June 17, 2005, 5:15pm 15

Re: ~Tu mujh se bichaRna chahey tou deewaar uTha dheeray dheeray~

^ thanks for liking KN :-)

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Rameesha June 17, 2005, 10:06pm 16

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very nice vv :k:… kal dairy uthai to yehi ghazal nazar say guzri