Tu Meray Pass Hay (1)

Azad · October 20, 2003, 7:49am

(Part -1 )

Tu Meray Pass Hay
San ki doori par
Akss her pal say teray
Deed ki pyass bojhay
Her sargoshi teri
Moj dar moj kahay
Gull hon chiragh sabhi
Sirf, Khwahishon ki aag jalay
Bheegti pur kayf hawa main …
Dhalti yeh raat kahay
Jo ab hay iss pal main yahain
Tayrgi ki godh main phir Nahi
Ayssa noor ka sailaab kahain
Khwab miltay hain haqeeqat say, yahain

Adab Arz
(Azad)

Swera · October 20, 2003, 3:13pm

Khwab miltay hain haqeeqat say, yahain

or

haqeeqat milti hay khwab say, kahaiN!

nice poem!

Azad · October 21, 2003, 6:11am

Nwazish Sawera Jee

Koyal · October 21, 2003, 10:22am

hmmmmmm

Dilsay · October 22, 2003, 2:29pm

Bohat achay... Khush rahoo....

Azad · October 23, 2003, 7:05am

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Bohat achay... Khush rahoo....
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La'nat ho Shytaan mardood par jo Hayaa dar dilon ko behkatay hain

Dilsay · October 23, 2003, 7:48pm

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*Originally posted by Azad: *

La'nat ho Shytaan mardood par jo Hayaa dar dilon ko behkatay hain
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What you mean....

Dilsay · October 23, 2003, 7:50pm

You have said a lot... this is my last reply and last post...

Khush rahoo....

Capricorn · October 23, 2003, 7:53pm

:o

chand_chehra · October 23, 2003, 8:24pm

hummmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Azad · October 24, 2003, 6:07am

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

What you mean....
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Kia haal hain ... or kia ho raha hay .... Shaytaan Oh .. hummm I was thinking about my email I wrote you earlier :D

Azad · October 24, 2003, 6:09am

chand_chehra ... Nawazish
Capri .... Adab
Koyal ... Jee aap Koyal

Azad · October 24, 2003, 6:45am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
You have said a lot... this is my last reply and last post...

Khush rahoo....
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Ab tum say kia kahain janaaN is qadar jhamailay main ... hummmmm Bhai meray baat sari bharay dil ki hay ... Dil hoga to Udass bhi rahay ga .. Gilay shikway bhi hongay ... Aanay janay ko machalta bhi hoga ... aap nay sirf apna socha bhala ho aap ka .... Un tankon par nazar nahi dali jo hum dil ko lagay baitthay hain ... Tankay lagwanay say fursat mailay to kuch sochain ...

cuteepie · October 24, 2003, 7:33am

nice 1 :)

Azad · October 24, 2003, 8:06am

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*Originally posted by cuteepie: *
nice 1 :)
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How cute

Dilsay · October 24, 2003, 2:55pm

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*Originally posted by Azad: *

Ab tum say kia kahain janaaN is qadar jhamailay main ... hummmmm Bhai meray baat sari bharay dil ki hay ... Dil hoga to Udass bhi rahay ga .. Gilay shikway bhi hongay ... Aanay janay ko machalta bhi hoga ... aap nay sirf apna socha bhala ho aap ka .... Un tankon par nazar nahi dali jo hum dil ko lagay baitthay hain ... Tankay lagwanay say fursat mailay to kuch sochain ...
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I dont understand.... but i can feel that you have lot to say....

Muslim_Queen · October 25, 2003, 12:25am

Re: Tu Meray Pass Hay (1)

Nice poem.:k: I like the part about ‘Sirf, Khwahishon ki aag jalay.’

Jaan_Lewaa · October 25, 2003, 2:21am

nice:k:

Zakhmi_Umar · October 25, 2003, 10:10am

hmmmmmm

:rotfl"

Azad · October 27, 2003, 6:21am

M queen ... Pasand karnay ka shukria
Jaanlewa .. Nawazish
Z Umar ..... :)