Tu khayaal hey to merey gumaan ki baahoN meiN utar

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Tu khayaal hey to merey gumaan ki baahoN meiN utar
tu khaab hey to kisi roz meri nigaahoN meiN utar

tu falak hey to meri manzil ka pataa dey mujh ko
tu chaand hey to kisi roz meri raahoN meiN utar

tu dhoop hey to sard mosam sey bachaa ley mujh ko
tu abr hey to kisi roz dil ke sehraaoN meiN utar

tu safar hey to meri saari umr safar meiN kattey
tu sabar hey to kisi roz meri sazaaoN meiN utar

tu khushbu hey to rag-o-pe meiN bas jaa aa kar
tu dhank hey to kisi roz meri fizaaoN meiN utar

tu maseeha hey to merey dard ka koi chaara kar
tu asar hey to kisi roz meri duwaaoN mein utar

By: Amal

MeiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN…

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Amal one of ma fav udrdu kain tu aur be beautiful…i have to quote sari cuz i love sari ki sari

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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You liked it because it was written…

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Or is it really good?

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[This message has been edited by Amal (edited August 08, 2002).]

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wow … buhat khobsorat Amal jee..

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did u really write that?its beautiful.

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dil to pagal hai

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zabardaaasssssttt!!! bohot hiiiiiiiiiii khooooob likhi he Amal

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thanks for posting

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

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Bahut khoob Amal, like always

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thori dair tu huns laynay daytay…

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very very veryyyyyyyyyy nice amal

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

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Oh its good to see another marvelous piece of poetry from you Amal

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Thanx for sharing

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Buhat Khoob

Owner of Mehkama-e-Sharafat
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Rude Boyz Rulez

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wow…
kya baat haye..
is shair ke saare shairs zabardast ahye

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boOl kE laB azAaD haYe teRe
JisM zubaaN ki MauT se pehle…

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Tu safar hay to meri saari umr safar mai kattay
tu sabar hay to kisi roz meri sazaaon mai utar

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tu safar hey to meri saari umr safar meiN kattey
tu sabar hey to kisi roz meri sazaaoN meiN utar

khubsurat khyal .....

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[quote]
Originally posted by Amal:
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tu dhoop hey to sard mosam sey bachaa ley mujh ko
tu abr hey to kisi roz dil ke sehraaoN meiN utar

tu safar hey to meri saari umr safar meiN kattey
tu sabar hey to kisi roz meri sazaaoN meiN utar

tu maseeha hey to merey dard ka koi chaara kar
tu asar hey to kisi roz meri duwaaoN mein utar

By: Amal

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Masha'Allah Beautiful as always:~)

Dua karo kay meiN uss kay liyey Duaa ho jaaoun
wuh aik shaKhs jo DiL ko Duaa sa Lagtaa hay

~DuniyaaN ki Mehfilon se ukta geya huun Ya-Rab
kya Lutf anjuman ka jab DiL hi bujh geya ho~
~
~kya Nazar dain jo koi Naie ArZoO karain
DiL mey tou Tootne kie bhie Himmat nahin rahi~

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Thanx a lot Rameesha ji, Azam#1, Amjad Bhai, CC, &Passionate, SunnyBoy, hanie, hayaa, kashish and GuL-e-Tasbeeh…I am glad to see my ‘fan club’ is growing day by day

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JUST KIDDING

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So nice all of you

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN…

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I always post only my own. Thanx for your comments

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN…

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[quote]
Originally posted by Amal:
[BTu khayaal hey to merey gumaan ki baahoN meiN utar
tu khaab hey to kisi roz meri nigaahoN meiN utar

tu falak hey to meri manzil ka pataa dey mujh ko
tu chaand hey to kisi roz meri raahoN meiN utar

tu dhoop hey to sard mosam sey bachaa ley mujh ko
tu abr hey to kisi roz dil ke sehraaoN meiN utar

tu safar hey to meri saari umr safar meiN kattey
tu sabar hey to kisi roz meri sazaaoN meiN utar

tu khushbu hey to rag-o-pe meiN bas jaa aa kar
tu dhank hey to kisi roz meri fizaaoN meiN utar

tu maseeha hey to merey dard ka koi chaara kar
tu asar hey to kisi roz meri duwaaoN mein utar

By: Amal

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matla tau simply divine hai
aur rest of ghazal bhi be_had haseen hai.
hamaari khush_qismati ke jinaab ka kalaam parhne ko milaa.
thanks

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bohat khoob:k:

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Bohot khoob Amal jee:k:

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it's beautiful