Tu Jo Gaya To Yuun Laga, Tanha Hoon Kainaat Main..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity March 3, 2008, 1:21pm 1

Aik Ghazal,

Aankhon Main Baaqi Reh Gaye, Ab Teray Khad-o-Khaal Se
Lub Pe Hain Kuch Sawal Se, Dil Main Hain Kuch Malaal Se

Tu Jo Gaya To Yuun Laga, Tanha Hoon Kainaat Main
Raatain Thaki Thaki Meri, Din Bhi Meray Nidhaal Se

Itne Qareeb Hoon Teray, Rasta Na Wehem Ko Milay
So’un Teray Hisaar Main, Jagoon Teray Jamal Se

Mujh Ko Hain Kaam Aur Bhi, Kuch To Karo Mera Khayal
Aatay Ho Jab Khayal Main, Jatay Nahi Khayal Se

Tujh Si Hasee’n Ghazal Koi, Mujh Sa Ghazal Sara Koi
Dunia Main Ho Ager Kaheen, Waazeh Karo Misaal Se

Uss Se Gila Ay Dosto, Itna Sa Hai Ke Wo Mujhe
Samjha Nahi Hai Aaj Tak, Ghaafil Hai Meray Haal Se

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

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bheegiyaad March 3, 2008, 2:50pm 2

Re: Tu Jo Gaya To Yuun Laga, Tanha Hoon Kainaat Main..

**Uss Se Gila Ay Dosto, Itna Sa Hai Ke Wo Mujhe
Samjha Nahi Hai Aaj Tak, Ghaafil Hai Meray Haal Se
**
interesting !!!..:k:

Koyal March 3, 2008, 3:53pm 3

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Beautiful sharing red :)

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aabla_pa March 3, 2008, 7:49pm 4

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pasand aa gaee :)

Shab-e-Hijar March 3, 2008, 7:57pm 5

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bohat pasand aye Ahmer beautiful sharing :)

_Masoom_Muskaan March 3, 2008, 8:01pm 6

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v nice

EEMAAN March 3, 2008, 10:37pm 7

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Bohat khoob..

Jhanjharewali March 4, 2008, 8:34am 8

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Ahmer- u never disappoint. hamesha kuch bahot khubsurat laate ho ke parh ke jee khush ho jata hei :)

redidentity March 4, 2008, 8:34am 9

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aap sab ki pasandeedgi ka bay'hud shukria.. :)

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redidentity March 4, 2008, 8:35am 10

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aww.. thank you JJW jee

GuL-e-Tasbeeh March 4, 2008, 9:41am 11

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Very nice Ahmar , thanks for sharing:-)

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redidentity March 4, 2008, 11:47am 12

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Thank you very much Gul jee :)

arsalanh2000 March 4, 2008, 1:02pm 13

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Tujh Si Hasee'n Ghazal Koi, Mujh Sa Ghazal Sara Koi
Dunia Main Ho Ager Kaheen, Waazeh Karo Misaal Se

Wah ji, Buhut khub Ahmed bhai

muncho March 4, 2008, 4:08pm 14

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very nice selection red g

redidentity March 5, 2008, 5:56am 15

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thnx arsalan and muncho jee :)

Aaana March 5, 2008, 6:01am 16

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wah

redidentity March 6, 2008, 5:56am 17

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thnx Aaana.. :)