Tu aur Main

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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woww very nice :k:

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beautiful poetry, thank u for helping me in fonts and introducing urdupad,i am highly obliged

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wah sahib aap ki kaya hi baat hai... itnay arsay say idhar ho par kabhi share karnay ka khayal nahin aya

bhai aap to bohat ba-maharat shaair hain... baaqi kalaam bhi share karin

aik tajweez hai... waisy to sooraj ko chiraagh dikhany kay mutaradif hai phir bhi hummat kar rahy hain... ummeed hai taba'a par giraan nahin guzary gi

matla kay fiqra saani main lafz 'hey' zayada lagta hai... agar 'hey' kay baghair parhin to fiqray main rawanagi zayada mehsoos hoti hai

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Wah! :lajawab:
Tillo chupy rustam nikly:D

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Thanks bheegiyaad, babar , CG and GN . .appreciate the kind words

CG , I wrote that many years ago and since then read it many times .. never found the flow . .I wonder someohow I can have you read that for me so I can see the flow .. I might not be reading it right then ...

Anyone else sees the same thing that CG pointed out.

I love all you freinds help .. thanks

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Another one you have to read out to me...:(

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Okee Dokee Niki :)

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Well i hate to do it .. But chacha is right ... misray mein 'hey' izzafii hai

Kuch yun ho tu Mu'Nasib hai ...

Jaysay Abid ko hai Kaaba Taasawur mein Bohaat
waysay he Duur tu mujse . Magar Pass Hoon Mein

when i read this ghazal .. mujay laga kay chunkay Ghazal ka markazi khayal , shair ki wardad-e-qalbi hai . is leay zaida munasib hai kay shair mein pay kahtam hoo . jis se Mein ( fard-e-wahid) pay zoorar paray ...

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CG talked about Matlaa

you are talking about Maqtaa

Now I am confused

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I did indeed mean matla and not maqta... maqta main 'hey' ki zaroorat hai warna wazn jata rahy ga, though uss ki jaga meray khayal main 'say' kay baad honi chahiye

tariq... mera matlab tha 'hey' kay baghair bhi shair mukammal hai... jaisy kay doosray shair kay pehlay misray main "tu gulistaan-e-wafa hey" ki bajaai "tu gulistaan-e-wafa" istemaal kiya hai ussi tarha matla main bhi 'hey' kay baghair kaam chal sakta hai...

bahar haal ye tumhara kalaam hai iss liye jiss tarha tumhain munasib lagy wohi munasib hai... doosray sirf tajweez day saktay hain, tajweez say tumhara muttafiq hona zaroori nahin hai :)

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a very nice poem, TLK bhai.

best,
Dushwari

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salam i have written poem and saved in JPEG format but i don,t know how to up load image.when i click on{ insert image} it asked about the URL of site on which image is present but my image is on desktop.i gave the adress as C:mydocument/desktop/22.jpeg but it did not work and imag is not loaded please tell me ,how to upload image.

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beautiful.. really an amazing poem.. :bb:

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Babar, first do "image upload", and then cut and paste it in your Reply box ...

the do preview post and hit that little icon of you rimage in preview window . it will poen up as big image in another window .. copy that URL

Now use that URL in the insert image box... PM me if you need anymore details

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wah beautiful :k:

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tu gulistan e wafaa mean piyar ke khushbo sahe
urr mean murjhaye howay pholoon kee bass hon

tera kia hay? tu to apni zaat mean hay anjuman
urr mean iss bheer mean tanhaie ka ehsaas hon

nice