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Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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jis din se judaa wo hum se hoay
is dil ne dharakna choor diya
hai chaand ka moun utra utra
taaron ne chamakna choor diya

wo paas hamare hote thay
be-rut bhee bahaar aa jatee theee
ap lakh baharein aayein tu kia
pholon ne mehekna choor diya

hamara koi saathee bhee nahi
ab yaad koi baQi bhee nahi
ab phool kihlein zakhmon k kia
ankhoon ne barasna choor diya

hum ne ye dua jub bhee mangi
taQdeer badul de aay malik
awaaz aayee k ab hum ne
taQdeerbadulna choor diya *

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Taqdeer bananay walay tu nay kami na kee
Aab kis ko kiya mila ya muqadar ke baat hai...

very nice reminds alot of things... thanks for sharing....

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Good but :(

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Re: :frowning: :frowning:

**Is dil ne dharakna chor diya… **

So beautiful and one of my fav :k::k::k:

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waqei impressive:k:

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zeberdest:k: :frowning:

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Nice1 :k:

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Re: :( :(

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
*

hum ne ye dua jub bhee mangi
taQdeer badul de aay malik
awaaz aayee k ab hum ne
taQdeerbadulna choor diya *
[/QUOTE]

:(

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Touchy!

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Punkaj Udha ne gayee huee hai yeh ghazal. Shuroo shuroo mein mujhe behad achee lagtee thee aur sun ke ro bhee leta tha mein :teary3:

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jiss din say juda woh hum say howay :k:

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Re: Re: :frowning: :frowning:

thanx forr liking Amarbail :slight_smile:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Taqdeer bananay walay tu nay kami na kee
Aab kis ko kiya mila ya muqadar ke baat hai...

very nice reminds alot of things... thanks for sharing....
[/QUOTE]

thanx alot for liking bhai jee :)

and also thanx for the shair its nice

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amazing