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udaasaankhein · January 30, 2003, 12:34pm

Whenever u ll ask me how i am
i ll say “thanku , i m fine”
i dont have enuff guts to admit to u
“come back, widout u i m dyin”
whenevr u ll meet me now
i ll b a stranger to u
but u have no idea that even after many years
i ll never ever stop lovin u.

my owm piece of poety , an immature try but i hope u would like it.

Dilsay · January 30, 2003, 12:35pm

First of all welcome
Secong you should have typed few more dots it is difficult to click on it..

Third... you are right this happens to almost everyone... having pain in heart near to die and when someon asks how are you we say fine... no one is brave... sad

udaasaankhein · January 30, 2003, 12:41pm

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
First of all welcome
Secong you should have typed few more dots it is difficult to click on it..

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firstly ... tahanx for the welcoem
second... thanx for the advice. i ll take care the next time . :D

Pyara_sa_doost · January 30, 2003, 12:57pm

bohat achee ;):)

udaasaankhein · January 30, 2003, 1:02pm

thanx . lekin y r u winking. i can take it. spill the beans..u didnt like itr .. haina???

Azad · January 30, 2003, 5:46pm

Chalain ab kay nahi poochain gay

system · January 30, 2003, 8:43pm

beautiful, keep it up.. :k::k:

pS: welcome

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 31, 2003, 5:02am

bohtu khoob:k::k:
welcome:flower1:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 31, 2003, 5:03am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
First of all welcome
Secong you should have typed few more dots it is difficult to click on it..

Third... you are right this happens to almost everyone...** having pain in heart near to die and when someon asks how are you we say fine... no one is brave... sad
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**

mere mein hemat hai and i'm brave:)
such bolne se khabhi bhi darna nahi chahe.chahe woh kuch bhi ho:)jo bhi dil mein ho woh keh dena chahe

Galaxy · January 31, 2003, 12:18pm

very true:k:

Azam_1 · January 31, 2003, 12:55pm

nice :k: keep it up!!

Capricorn · January 31, 2003, 1:53pm

Amazing…Some times coincidences confuse..While reading your this poem I thought as if I know you and know you a lot
Nice to read you
Have a nice stay here, welcome

udaasaankhein · January 31, 2003, 4:55pm

thank u everybody for such a warm welcome.

ghazal kisi ki:
u r rite ke jo dil mein ho keh dena chahiye lekin when somebody doesnt even care abt ur feelings then there is no need to waste ur words. ur saying something isnt goin to change anything.

azam , capricorn and galaxy: thanx for liking it. this would encourage me to write more. :)

chand_chehra · January 31, 2003, 5:20pm

Nicee :k:
keep it up