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Beautiful 
Wah ji Wah!
I'm no shaayer but remove 'bhi' from 2nd & 4th line. It's appropriate that way.
Agree - it sounds more balanced if remove bhi from those 2 lines.
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**Awesome lines...
Rehne diya na us ne kisi kaam ka mujhe
Aur khak mein bhi mujh ko mila kr nahi gya**
nice sharing :k: