Us ki maseehai sabhi k liye
merey zakham waisey hi harey
us phool ki khushbu sabhi k liye
kantey hi kantey merey daman mein
us chand ki roshni sab k liye
meri raahon mein faqat andhera
us shajar ki chayon har aik k liye
kari dhoop bas meri zindagi mein
wo barasta sawan sabhi k liye
meri zaat jhulasta Sehra
us ki sakhawat sab sayalon k liye
meri jholi khali ki khali…
*** us ka waqt sab k liye***
*** meri qismat mein bas IntizAr***
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*Buhat Touchy Aur Dard Say Bharpoor nazam ..... Rani G Itna Dard kahan Say aagia Aap key shae'ri main ...... MashaAllah Buhat khubsurat She'r Hay Aap Key ..... *
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thx sanan g shayari to nhi hai ye mujhey nhi ata shayari karna ye to bas kuch lafz hain jo dil sey nikley or safhey pe bikhar gaye
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Yup I know Raani G whatever u wrote feels an incident of life ..... anyway jazbat ka izhaar bhi kissi kissi ko aata hay aur woh bhi itni khubsurati say ........ ek She'r araz karta hoon
Hum Hain Roh-E-Safar , Hameen Namoon Say Nah Pahchaan **
**Kal Aur Kissi Naam Say Chalain Aain Gay Hum Loog
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merey zakham waisey hi harey
us phool ki khushbu sabhi k liye kantey hi kantey merey daman mein
us chand ki roshni sab k liye meri raahon mein faqat andhera
us shajar ki chayon har aik k liye kari dhoop bas meri zindagi mein
wo barasta sawan sabhi k liye
meri zaat jhulasta Sehra
us ki sakhawat sab sayalon k liye meri jholi khali ki khali.............................
us ka waqt sab k liye meri qismat mein bas IntizAr
simply very touchy n soooo beeeeeeeeeeeeaaauuuttttiiiifulll Rani keep it up n keep sharing
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As per your own standard, this piece does not justify your talent. Excuse me 
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Hum Hain Roh-E-Safar , Hameen Namoon Say Nah Pahchaan ** **Kal Aur Kissi Naam Say Chalain Aain Gay Hum Loog
^^gr8 sannan bhai
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Amal bohat shukriya aap ki masbat tanqeed k liye but let me explane it plzz, aap mujh sey ye tawaqqa mat rakhen k main koi shayara hun ro har nazam ya ghazal mein wazan ka poora khayal rakhun gi ya radeef-o-qafia ki hadood mein qaid rahun gi, main koi shayara nahin hun na hi mujhey shayari ati hai, kuch ilfaaz aisey b hotey hain or kuch shikwey aisey b hotey hain jo zehan mein oodham to machaye rakhtey hain lekin zuban qasir rehti hai un ko bayan karney sey, ye b chand aisey hi ilfaaz they jo jaisey they main ney likh diye or pursakoon ho gai, or aap ko pasand nhi aye us k liye muaazret khua hun koshish karun gi aap k taste k lehaaz sey kuch likhun,
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merey zakham waisey hi harey
us phool ki khushbu sabhi k liye kantey hi kantey merey daman mein
us chand ki roshni sab k liye meri raahon mein faqat andhera
us shajar ki chayon har aik k liye kari dhoop bas meri zindagi mein
wo barasta sawan sabhi k liye
meri zaat jhulasta Sehra
us ki sakhawat sab sayalon k liye meri jholi khali ki khali.............................
us ka waqt sab k liye meri qismat mein bas IntizAr
Alfaaz ka chunao buhat acha hay bas kuch idher udher ho rahi hay , lekin i enjoy very much aesey nazmein aur ghazlein jis ki nok palak kabhi na bhi sanwari jaaey tou parhney mei maza dey, baaz oqaat har cheez aik sahi jagah pe achi nahi bhi lagti:~) yehi kisi wadye shaair nay likhi hoti tou log kahtey arey wah kamal kar diya Faiz or ghalib or whatever :p
keep it up girl u have the talent, i am proud of you:-)
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main aap sey ittifaq karti hun gul
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Rani saheba you are known to us through your poetry. I always hold that your readers are well-placed to tell how good you are. What I read of you earlier, set in my mind a certain level of standard that you can attain. I therefore said that it does not justify your talent because you are capable of writing much, much better. Aap be'shaq "shayara" na hoN lekin ye mehaz aap ki apni raey ho sakti hey apney baarye meiN, lekin hum to aap ko shaera samajhtey heiN. You do write very well. I hope you remember my earlier comments on your earlier threads :)
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yes amal aap , zamil ,darwesh and zamil , aap logon k comments merey liye qeemti sarmaya hain, bcz kehtey hain na k tareef karney waley bohat hotey hain lekin behtreen wo hota hai jo aik behtreen naqqad bhi ho or khobion k sath khamiyon pe bhi nazar rakhey or agah karta rahey, mujhey aap k sab coments yaad hain bohat achi tara, be had shukriya