toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

HallaGulla March 19, 2007, 8:52pm 1

*Toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai *
duniyaa teree taraf hai khudaa mere saath hai

*aavaaz ghunghgharuon kee naheen hai to kyaa huaa *
saagar ke tootne kee sadaa mere saath hai

*tanhaa_i kis ko kehate hain mujhko pataa naheen *
*kyaa jaane kis haseen kee duaa mere saath hai *

*paimaanaa saamne hai to kuchh gham naheen “Nizam” *
ab dard-e-dil kee ko_i davaa mere saath hai

*~~~*****~~~ *
Nizam Rampuri
~~~*****~~~

HallaGulla March 20, 2007, 3:38pm 2

Re: toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai

bhai vaah:hoonh:

~**~ Tussi Baray ----- Ho ~~~~ ~**~

_MuNiYa March 20, 2007, 3:57pm 3

Re: toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai

really nice.
:)

hiba_no.1 March 20, 2007, 4:56pm 4

Re: toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai

nice one

aabla_pa March 20, 2007, 5:43pm 5

Re: toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai

Wah. Bhot Achi poem hai.

go haath ko junbish nahi, aankhon mein to dam hai
rehnay do abhi saagar-o-meena mere aagay

Kya haseenein duaein b deti hein ???

Shab-e-Hijar March 20, 2007, 6:52pm 6

Re: toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai

:k:

Asma_Farhan March 20, 2007, 6:58pm 7

Re: toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai

superb!

moonmine March 20, 2007, 7:35pm 8

Re: toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai

good one....

HallaGulla March 20, 2007, 8:30pm 9

Re: toote huye dilon kee duaa mere saath hai

Agar shayar kehta hai to kuchch sach to hoga hi.