To us kay pass kya rehta ...????

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

tum_bin_1 August 24, 2007, 5:04pm 1

Agar Aansoo Baha Daita To Us Key Pass Kya Rehta?
Wo mujh Ko hosla Daia To Us Key Pass Kya Rehta?

Nishaan mujh Ko Nahi Milta kOii Us Tak Pohan’chney Ka
Mujhey Apna Patta Daita To Us Key Pass Kya Rehta?

Wo Is Maan Mein Tha, K Jis Key Dam Par Ab Wo Zinda hai
Main Us Ka Dil dukha Daita To Us Key Pass Kya Rehta?

Musafir Saray He Phall Kha Key Apnii Raah Chal daitey
Shajar Tehnii jhukka Daita To Us Key Pass Kya Rehta?

Meri Yaadoun Ney He Ab Tak Usey Aabad Rakha hai
Wo mujh Ko Bhi bhulla Daita To Us Key Pass Kya Rehta?

babri August 24, 2007, 6:31pm 2

Re: To us kay pass kya rehta …???

Iteni achi poem aur koi reply nahi:naraz:baki sab kahan hai? so rehe hain sab kiya?
Bohat khoob jee.

bholibisri August 24, 2007, 11:50pm 3

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nice sharing lagat hia kuch din pahlay kisi ne ki thei ye gazal post :)

chann say jo koi sapna jag soona soona laagay

redidentity August 25, 2007, 4:19am 4

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Beautiful

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Shumaisa August 25, 2007, 5:14am 5

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Buhat zabardasstt.. :k:

being_lonely August 25, 2007, 6:34am 6

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kOi HaMein Yaad KArta Hai kYa ?

SJ August 25, 2007, 3:27pm 7

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zaberdast :k:

Prince_Ali August 25, 2007, 4:37pm 8

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very nice :k:

Sheal August 25, 2007, 5:09pm 9

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very nice sharing :)

tum_bin_1 August 27, 2007, 8:51am 10

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thanks

tum_bin_1 August 28, 2007, 5:19pm 11

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**Thanks u all **

**sevenstar , bholibisri , redidentity , shumaisa , being lonely , soniaa , prince Ali , n ****sheal **