to raah mein khaaR boye ga, ya phir palkeiN bichayega

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

NikamiJano January 21, 2008, 12:20pm 1

usay jab yaad aaye ga k saawan lot aaya hai
bula le ga woh mujhko ya khud hi lot aayega

usay jab yaad ayega main kaise muskuRata tha
to aankhein muskuRayengi, ya daaman bheeg jayega

usay jab yaad ayega main kaise naam leta tha
to meRa naam likhega, ya apna bhi mitaayega

usay jab yaad aayega mera khaamosh sa rehna
to sab ko bol dega wo ya khud se bhi chupaayega

usay jab yaad aayega meRa nange sar phirna
to bijli ban k karke gaa, ya baadal baN k chhaye ga

u****say jab yaad aayega mera chalna, mera phirna
to raah meiN khaaR boye ga, ya phir palkein bichayega

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Ali_2 January 21, 2008, 1:39pm 2

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very nice :k:

thankf for sharing

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????

deadsoul January 21, 2008, 4:14pm 3

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nice

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muncho January 21, 2008, 4:14pm 4

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very nice

redidentity January 21, 2008, 5:13pm 5

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beautiful… :k:

bheegiyaad January 21, 2008, 5:43pm 6

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mazay ki hai :k:

nokia_n70 January 21, 2008, 6:58pm 7

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Salaam
usay jab yaad aaye ga k saawan lot aaya hai
bula le ga woh mujhko ya khud hi lot aayega
Kash khud he aa jata koi :(
nice shiring
thanx NJ

Yes/No Game

Dushwari January 21, 2008, 7:17pm 8

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NJ, nice poem.

it enables the betrayer to redeem ownself, and see clear as mud, what that person lost.
unfortunately, some people dont see this depth of being trusted and as matter of factly leave after they have gotten what they wanted out of a person who is honest to them and actually cares about them.
in any event,
thanks for sharing.
bst,
Dushwari

ASA January 22, 2008, 5:11am 9

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Woh boli kon aksar yaad ata hai udaasi main
Mian bola kuch puraney raastey, bachpan or ek lerki

► Kuch Urdu Muhawraat aur Unn kay Mafhoom ◄

babri January 22, 2008, 9:14am 10

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nice sharing.

~~~ Missing someone ~~~

~~~ Missing someone ~~~

Azad January 23, 2008, 8:30am 11

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hummm

Daanie January 23, 2008, 7:00pm 12

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buhut khoob :)

Shumaisa January 23, 2008, 7:39pm 13

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Beautiful..
Thnx for sharing.

sunny_nicky January 23, 2008, 8:17pm 14

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buhat khoob nikami g :)

_Masoom_Muskaan January 25, 2008, 9:31pm 15

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NikamiJano January 26, 2008, 2:59am 16

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NikamiJano January 26, 2008, 2:59am 17

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thanks sunny :)

NikamiJano January 26, 2008, 3:00am 18

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thanks shumaisa aj kal kam kam nazar a rehi kahaN hoti haiN ap

Dushwari January 26, 2008, 3:05am 19

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nice poem. NJ.
nice poem.

best,

Dushwari

Jhanjharewali January 27, 2008, 7:07am 20

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Very nice jano ji