TO aLL POET, POETESS..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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here i give a sentence, CaN anyone make a ghasal out of it … wnt to c, how mny of you give WHaT turn to the sentence…

kis terha hum naam se be-naam hoe..

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kis terha hum naam se be-naam hoe..
tere shaher main nilaaam sar-e-aam hoe

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Very good :-)

and very good idea meena_s :-)

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Re: TO aLL POET, POETESS..

kis terha hum naam se be-naam hoe
hum se unjaan ghar k dar o baam hoe

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kis terha hum naam se be-naam hoe
kitchen ke kam se parieshan hoe

:p

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bohat hee aala wonderful IS..

though i have never done this before i just like reading and sharing poetry can't write it but will try for the very first time

kis terha hum naam se be-naam hoe
mohabbat k maamlay main har baar nakaam hue

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Zabardast:)

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Wah muncho bhiya:)

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hahahahahaha MM say yehi towaqa thee app umeed pay poori utrii:)

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Nice try:)

Best Hair Oil
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kis terha hum naam se be-naam hoe
Jub Say Aalo Oor Piyaaz Kay Aik Daam Hoe

Galay Saray Phal Sir-e-Bazaar Nilaam Hoe
Khareedar Sub Kay Sub Muft Main Gunahgaar Hoe

Apologetic Islamic take on Evolution ... Or unkind dismissal?
Apologetic Islamic take on Evolution ... Or unkind dismissal?
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kis terha hum naam se be-naam hoe..
Tairay Shaher Main Aa Kay Yun Gumnaam Hoe

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Re: TO aLL POET, POETESS..

kis terha hum naam se be-naam hoe..
Saghr o saqi say ab baada o jam huay

Meri kismat mujhe tujh pe bharosa ha bohat
aisa lagta hai meray gardish e ayaam huay

pagal o awara, sharabi o sodai raza
aashiq o diwana ab tou meray naam huay

Timepass / Uncle Ehsan's Baithak - August 2012
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Wah wah Wah Buhat Zabardast:)

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Re: TO aLL POET, POETESS..

great...
bohat achha
i really enjoyed, now would anyone like to hear the real i wrote...
so it is here...

kis terhan hum naam se be naam hoe
piyar main tere bohat badnaam hoe..

teri aamad p mairay ghar main bahaar aati thi,
tere jaanay se mairay soonay dar-o-baam hoe..

jab tak tuu tha...koi mujhay shoq naa tha...
ab haal ye hai shoq mere "jaam" hoe...

idher to ji jala hai, aur ghuut raha hai dum
dushman hamaray, dekho udher raam hoe

kabhi khaas rakha tha hamen jinke dil ne
unke liye hum aaaj bohat aam hoe

aasaan hoa unhe, hame pal me bhuladena
jinke liye bechain subh-o-shaam hoe...

meena ne saha kese janay ke tere baad...
bohat tuursh log, bohat talkh aiyyam hoe!

:)

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now ready for other???

Hum jis ko apna maan samajh bethe thay...

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Nice Meena g.. Keep it up....

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thankoooo

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meena wonderful .. hav u written ths by urself ...

wow lovely :)

bolo bolo..
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yes i have... m a poetess too:)
i didnt want to disclose my THIS quality here, magar shaaeerana tabiyat ne saath dene se inkaar ker diya :)