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[Amal]

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Na’jaaney kin andaazoN sey lehjoN ki taameer kia kartey heiN
MeraY khuloos ko dushmani saY woh Ta’beer kiya kartaY haiN

kahaani chorrye ik lafz bhi toofaan-e-waqt nahi mitaney paata
kuch log asbaaq-e-wafa dil ke lahu sey tehreer kia kartey heiN

dard barhta hey to teri yaad sey cheirr detey heiN teri baateiN
hum to dawaa ke tor par bas yehi ik tadbeer kia kartey heiN

heyrateiN toot parreiN gi agar deikho kabhi mashaagil un ke
parchaar-e-ishq pe jo log raat-o-din taqreer kia kartey heiN

ab???

[NikamiJano]

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@Sheal

nikami ji nazer doraiyay ap ko pata chal jay ga k kon hai…

sheal g galases nahi hian na is waqat

[Sheal]

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hai wohi jo pehlay likha tha bas kuch changes ki hain....... ab to boojh lain nikami ji

[NikamiJano]

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Na'jaaney kin andaazoN sey lehjoN ki taameer kia kartey heiN
MeraY khuloos ko dushmani saY woh Ta'beer kiya kartaY haiN
Beautiful asusal :)

[AQ]

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@Amal

heyrateiN toot parreiN gi agar deikho kabhi mashaagil un ke
parchaar-e-ishq pe jo log raat-o-din taqreer kia kartey heiN

ab???

hahaha.. yeh kiss par shot maaraa hai aap naY

[Amal]

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@Anwaar Qureshi

Nikamijee poem kee zameen maiN gumm haiN shayad

NikamiJi aur poem???..

[AQ]

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@NikamiJano

Na’jaaney kin andaazoN sey lehjoN ki taameer kia kartey heiN
MeraY khuloos ko dushmani saY woh Ta’beer kiya kartaY haiN
Beautiful asusal

iss maiN doosri line meri hai

waisaY sirf wohi aik line meri hai

[AQ]

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@Amal

NikamiJi aur poem???..

No comments… mujhaY warning naheeN lainee

[Amal]

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@Anwaar Qureshi

hahaha.. yeh kiss par shot maaraa hai aap naY

Ye hum ney andha-dhun firing ki hey…bach jaao jis jis ney bac’chna hey

[NikamiJano]

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@Sheal

hai wohi jo pehlay likha tha bas kuch changes ki hain....... ab to boojh lain nikami ji

is pay'aaR ko maiN kia naam dooN
bakray k galay maiN choohia baandh dooN :D

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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@Amal

Ye hum ney andha-dhun firing ki hey…bach jaao jis jis ney bac’chna hey

mai to firing karnay waly kay pechay ho …
baqi bachoo

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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@NikamiJano

is pay’aaR ko maiN kia naam dooN
bakray k galay maiN choohia baandh dooN

bandh dain baqra to vegetarian hota hai khaye ga nahi choohiya ko

[NikamiJano]

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@Amal

NikamiJi aur poem???..

:hinna:

[NikamiJano]

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@Shab-e-Hijar

mai to firing karnay waly kay pechay ho …
baqi bachoo

ap b na kis k pechay lag gaien haiN

[Amal]

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Anwaar bhai aap ki ghazal ki taraf kisi ka dhiyaan bhi nahi........ab na to hum khileiN ge aur na idhar rukeiN ge..........apun jaa rey la ey :D

[AQ]

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@NikamiJano

is pay’aaR ko maiN kia naam dooN
bakray k galay maiN choohia baandh dooN

ROFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLl

Amal, yeh aap kee baat kaa amali jawaab hai

[NikamiJano]

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@Shab-e-Hijar

bandh dain baqra to vegetarian hota hai khaye ga nahi choohiya ko

ye bakra brayani kooftay khanay wala hia..koftey khatey khatey choohia ko b chba jaiey gha…

[AQ]

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@Shab-e-Hijar

bandh dain baqra to vegetarian hota hai khaye ga nahi choohiya ko

dun underestimate bakraa

[NikamiJano]

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@Amal

Anwaar bhai aap ki ghazal ki taraf kisi ka dhiyaan bhi nahi…ab na to hum khileiN ge aur na idhar rukeiN ge…apun jaa rey la ey

ap ne gazal ki tareef nahi suni kia?

[AQ]

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@Amal

Anwaar bhai aap ki ghazal ki taraf kisi ka dhiyaan bhi nahi…ab na to hum khileiN ge aur na idhar rukeiN ge…apun jaa rey la ey

konsi poem… jo iss thread maiN hai… yaaraa.. dun worry… I will think about it… I think I can come up with something more later Insha Allah