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abaY yaar.. woh chiRyaa aayi phir saY, lay kar uRR gayi daanaa phur saY .. waali kahaani thee yeh ![]()
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abaY yaar.. woh chiRyaa aayi phir saY, lay kar uRR gayi daanaa phur saY .. waali kahaani thee yeh ![]()
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Guys, merey paas aao merey dosto aek ghazal likheiN..........arey you ready guys?
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wo jo chiriya daanaa lenay aai thi na wohi in chawaloon main gir gai. chalain Amal ab gosht bhi aa gaya chiriya ka is main. ab kha lijiyay :D
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explain it further please ![]()
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Koi ghazal likhtey heiN na mil kar........you start the matla.....first line bhi chaley gi aur mukammal malta bhi.
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good idea…
let me start… dun post anyone ![]()
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MeraY khuloos ko dushmani saY woh Ta'beer kiya kartaY haiN
how's that:p?
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hmmmmmmm..........hamaarey ideas good hi hotey heiN.........:)
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Salam sab ko kia Nikami k leay kisi k passs faltoo time pasing hai ye sab ka off honay ka irada hai tu me khud he off ho jati
sajna ne phul maa'raya meRi roh falak taak roo'ee
logoN k pathrooN se hamiN peeR zaRa b na hu'ee :(
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MeraY khuloos ko dushmani saY woh Ta'beer kiya kartaY haiN
how's that:p?
Na'jaaney kin andaazoN sey lehjoN ki taameer kia kartey heiN
MeraY khuloos ko dushmani saY woh Ta'beer kiya kartaY haiN
Making sense? :)
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it now looks like yours … ![]()
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Kya huwa Anwaar?????? mazaa nahi aaya???? :(
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ayaa naa… araY bhai… it looks so perfect that the second misra’ does not look like mine anymore ![]()
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Lo kar lo baat…bas yehi sunna baaqi reh gaya tha ![]()
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aur kia kia kuhc suna hai ap ne
bummer:
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Ziaada baateiN, agla misra ready karo ab…misra ya line…whatever …aaj ghazal pakaa kar hi utthna hey…phir isey sab ke leeye post kareiN ge…meiN to kehta hooN Nikamiji ko bhi pakarr lao beech meiN ![]()
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Jab kuch aamad hoti hey, aap hi ki taraf sey hoti hey…by the way…admin waley dhoond rahey the aap ko ![]()
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^ acha wo keon auR kahN pe dhoondh rahya :(
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Ziaada baateiN, agla misra ready karo ab.......misra ya line.........whatever ...aaj ghazal pakaa kar hi utthna hey....phir isey sab ke leeye post kareiN ge.......meiN to kehta hooN Nikamiji ko bhi pakarr lao beech meiN :)
mushkil zameen chunn lee hai yaar... let me think :D
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“Lo khud apney daam mein saiyaad aa gaya” ![]()