Timepass January 2015 (Naya Saal, Purani Dua)

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Re: Timepass January 2015 (Naya Saal, Purani Dua)

@TS

Maybe you were impressed but I thought his explanation was weak.

I don’t want to discourage him nor do I know the quality of his novel.

I just mentioned some things that stood out to me.

I value creativity. gramamr shashke are secondary to me. A good story teller is above English grammar teacher for me.