Timepass January 2015 (Naya Saal, Purani Dua)

muqawwee123 · January 29, 2015, 8:48am

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http://www.paklinks.com/gs/gs-book-club/651320-an-author-among-us-5.html

post number 83 se lekar aakhir tak TS ki suthri li gai hai

jasos · January 29, 2015, 8:57am

Re: Timepass January 2015 (Naya Saal, Purani Dua)

aor sanjeeda guftagu mein u trolling ker rahey they :cobra:

muqawwee123 · January 29, 2015, 8:59am

Re: Timepass January 2015 (Naya Saal, Purani Dua)

main to musalihat ki koshish kar raha tha

jasos · January 29, 2015, 9:02am

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jub do parhey likhay bat ker rahay ho to darmian mein not cum :cobra: waisey achi bahas ho rahi hey un donon key waisey koun jeet raha hey akhri khabrain anay tak

TS · January 29, 2015, 9:04am

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Maybe you were impressed but I thought his explanation was weak.

I don't want to discourage him nor do I know the quality of his novel.

I just mentioned some things that stood out to me.

muqawwee123 · January 29, 2015, 9:08am

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I value creativity. gramamr shashke are secondary to me. A good story teller is above English grammar teacher for me.

muqawwee123 · January 29, 2015, 9:09am

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TS dheet hai aur TlGER sweet hai

TS · January 29, 2015, 9:11am

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But not for native speakers of the language.

Would you read a book in bad Urdu with grammar, spelling, sentence construction and usage errors. I think not.

jasos · January 29, 2015, 9:12am

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me note ker raha hon u PA mein TS per doray aor idher tiger per doray dal rahey ho :cobra: khairiat hey na kis chker mein per gey ho

TS · January 29, 2015, 9:13am

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Khoob guzray gi jo
Mil baiThain gay deewaanay do

Ta ra ru Ta ra ru Ta ra ru
Ta ra ru Ta ra ru
Ta ra ru Ta ra ru

muqawwee123 · January 29, 2015, 9:14am

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meda sohna to fikar na kar… tedi vi vaari aae gi

jasos · January 29, 2015, 9:14am

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u ney yeh bat bilkul theek kahi :cobra:

lekin

me ney kuch kahanian urdu aor angraizi key aisi parhi hein keh jin ka grammer sey dor dor tak koi taluq nahin lekin like key jati hay aor parhi bhi jati hein

ab us ka link mat mangna ban ho jaon ga mein

TS · January 29, 2015, 9:15am

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He is what you call a classic Harjaa’ii.

Aur ab kissi masoom laRki ko phanssaanay ja raha hai.

jasos · January 29, 2015, 9:16am

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Ko
maida route vakhra ay :cobra: hun ay nah adheen keh ko da matbal dasoo

TS · January 29, 2015, 9:16am

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Ya’ni aap ghaTTiya literature kay aadi hain, charass kay ilaava.

jasos · January 29, 2015, 9:17am

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Hijra oh harjai likha hay :cobra:
yeh kia likha dia

TS · January 29, 2015, 9:17am

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HARJAA’II kameena.

TS · January 29, 2015, 9:18am

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muqawwee123 · January 29, 2015, 9:19am

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aap ne konsa literature paRha huwa hai?

jasos · January 29, 2015, 9:19am

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ab ghatya banda ghatya chezein aor ghatya logon he sey bat kara ga na :cobra:
me k sarey shouq ghatia hein aor mein kabhi chupata nahin hon