Thumahari hansee

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Tumahari meethi hansi kee yaad main mainay
Hazaroon kanch ke chooriya firsh e dil pa toori hain

by Dilsay

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bahut piyari koshish ~

kabhi hamari post per bhi nazar e karam kardein ~

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Jharna~jhankar: *
bahut piyari koshish ~

kabhi hamari post per bhi nazar e karam kardein ~
[/QUOTE]

hum kiya kisi par nazara karam karain gay.... main tu kuch behi nahi hoo....

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very cool :k:

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:k:

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Re: Thumahari hansee

Beuatiful:k:

ye soch kar ke kabhi haalaat sey tu bach kar aaey
kitni hi khoobsurat titliyaaN pakarr ke chori heiN

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Re: Re: Thumahari hansee

Amal jee thanks and i am feeling good that i think my post is the only post sofar as much as i have seen which has made you to reply with a shair… correct me if i am wrong…

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Thanks

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Thanks a lot

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Amal jee ... i think my post is the only post sofar as much as i have seen which has made you to reply with a shair.... correct me if i am wrong....
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It's very very rare that I respond to anybody with
a sheir or a full-length item. I understand that if
somehow my response steal the spotlight from your
contribution, it will be grossly improper and an
injustice to your effort. I religiously believe
that in your thread, the responders and the
responses must have only you in focus - entirely!
To be more precise, I hate to respond with sheirs
in others' thread. If I really have something
special to share with others, I should consider a
separate thread. Perhaps for a change I wrote a
sheir in your thread, that wasn't good but I am
sure you won't mind it. All the credit to your
beautiful sheir which made me respond in a way that
I am not known for. Keep writing:)

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Re: Thumahari hansee

bohat khoobsurat :k:

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:k:

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bohat khoob, :k::k:

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:k:

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Dilsay: *
**Tumahari meethi hansi kee yaad main mainay
Hazaroon kanch ke chooriya firsh e dil pa toori hain*

by Dilsay
[/QUOTE]

Superb Dilsay........

sitam zareef'fae halaat aur kya ho gee
khawab zaeyada hain neendain thoori hain

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

It's very very rare that I respond to anybody with
a sheir or a full-length item. I understand that if
somehow my response steal the spotlight from your
contribution, it will be grossly improper and an
injustice to your effort. I religiously believe
that in your thread, the responders and the
responses must have only you in focus - entirely!
To be more precise, I hate to respond with sheirs
in others' thread. If I really have something
special to share with others, I should consider a
separate thread. Perhaps for a change I wrote a
sheir in your thread, that wasn't good but I am
sure you won't mind it. All the credit to your
beautiful sheir which made me respond in a way that
I am not known for. Keep writing:)
[/QUOTE]

Aap aik lafz hi keh detae , tu hum samujh jatae.........we are already convinced.............

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *

Superb Dilsay........

sitam zareef'fae halaat aur kya ho gee
khawab zaeyada hain neendain thoori hain
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i am really touched by all the comments i have got... and i am happy to see you back after a long time.... welcome back

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buhat khub. bhuat khoobsoorat baat kahe aap nay. keep it up.

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dilsay ji hi aap ki shikayaat door hogaye sub say pehlay aap ko hi kia hai guzaratay huay :)

wah kia khoob kaha aap nay !

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
dilsay ji hi aap ki shikayaat door hogaye sub say pehlay aap ko hi kia hai guzaratay huay :)

wah kia khoob kaha aap nay !
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great and heppy to see you back