Thori si shaiyri!

[Hum_Hain]

**Agar jana ho to qadmon ke nishaan bhi saath le jana
Tumhare baad mein takta rahoonga raah guzar kab tak?

In roz ke sajdon mein asar kyon nahi hota,
Mein chahta hoon phir us se milan kyon nahi hota,

Kehte hain badal deta hai sab ki Khuda taqdeer,
Phir meri hi taqdeer mein badal kyon nahi hota.

Is qadar dil ko lagaya hi nahin tha hum ne
chorna chaha to hanste huey chora hum ne

maut ki aankhon mein daale huey aankhien jeena
zindagi qarz tera youn bhi utara hum ne

dushmanon ke liye dil dukhta hai aksar apna
log ache hain mile jab bhi woh socha hum nai

apna deewan murattab teri baaton se hua
naam is ka bhi tere naam pe rakha hum ne

jaan dene ki faqat baat nahi
jo kaha wohi karke dekhaya hum nai **

[arifnawaz1]

Wao ! All the verses are so beautiful !

Thanks for sharing !

Naa aati hain teri yaadain na aansoo ab nikaltay hain
Bahut mushkil se mere din meri jaan ab guzartay hain
Suna hai meri yaadon ko hai tu ne bhi bhula daala
Suna hai phir bhi aankhon mein teri saawan thehartay hain

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

ver nice:k:
thanks for sharinf wiht us:)

[Jaan_Lewaa]

Re: Thori si shaiyri!

*Originally posted by Hum Hain: *
Agar jana ho to qadmon ke nishaan bhi saath le Jaana
Tumhare baad mein takta rahoonga raah guzar kab tak?

In roz ke sajdon mein asar kyon nahi hota,
Mein chahta hoon phir us se milan kyon nahi hota,

Kehte hain badal deta hai sab ki Khuda taqdeer,
Phir meri hi taqdeer mein badal kyon nahi hota.

Is qadar dil ko lagaya hi nahin tha hum ne
chorna chaha to hanste huey chora hum ne

maut ki aankhon mein daale huey aankhien jeena
zindagi qarz tera youn bhi utara hum ne

dushmanon ke liye dil dukhta hai aksar apna
log ache hain mile jab bhi woh socha hum nai

apna deewan murattab teri baaton se hua
naam is ka bhi tere naam pe rakha hum ne

Jaan dene ki faqat baat nahi
jo kaha wohi karke dekhaya hum nai

wah ji wah:k:

[karachiest]

bhot achay, bhot khubsurat

[Hum_Hain]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *
Wao ! All the verses are so beautiful !

Thanks for sharing !

Naa aati hain teri yaadain na aansoo ab nikaltay hain
Bahut mushkil se mere din meri jaan ab guzartay hain
Suna hai meri yaadon ko hai tu ne bhi bhula daala
Suna hai phir bhi aankhon mein teri saawan thehartay hain
[/QUOTE]

wah wah! lagta hai aap ki zuban se sher hi jharte hain! ;)
kya baat hai! :p

thanx all for pasand karing!

[arifnawaz1]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Hum Hain: *

wah wah! lagta hai aap ki zuban se sher hi jharte hain! ;)
kya baat hai! :p

thanx all for pasand karing!
[/QUOTE]

Chalo shukar hai yeh nahee kaha phool jhartay hain ;)

[ShaRaRa]

nice :k:

[Dragon_King]

Nice :k:

[XChorniX]

asadiiiiiiii dat wuz beeeeeeetifulllllllllll

[Lamhay]

Re: Thori si shaiyri!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Hum Hain: *
**Agar jana ho to qadmon ke nishaan bhi saath le jana
Tumhare baad mein takta rahoonga raah guzar kab tak?

In roz ke sajdon mein asar kyon nahi hota,
Mein chahta hoon phir us se milan kyon nahi hota,

Kehte hain badal deta hai sab ki Khuda taqdeer,
Phir meri hi taqdeer mein badal kyon nahi hota.

ye thori si hai hum hain ji alfaaz nahi simply wonderful!thori sey main ye haal tu poori main tu sab beyhaal ;)

Is qadar dil ko lagaya hi nahin tha hum ne
chorna chaha to hanste huey chora hum ne

maut ki aankhon mein daale huey aankhien jeena
zindagi qarz tera youn bhi utara hum ne

dushmanon ke liye dil dukhta hai aksar apna
log ache hain mile jab bhi woh socha hum nai

apna deewan murattab teri baaton se hua
naam is ka bhi tere naam pe rakha hum ne

jaan dene ki faqat baat nahi
jo kaha wohi karke dekhaya hum nai **
[/QUOTE]

[Hum_Hain]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *

Chalo shukar hai yeh nahee kaha phool jhartay hain ;)
[/QUOTE]

Phool to aap ki un ke moon se jharainge naa! ;)

[Hum_Hain]

Re: Re: Thori si shaiyri!

*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
ye thori si hai hum hain ji alfaaz nahi simply wonderful!thori sey main ye haal tu poori main tu sab beyhaal

Adaab!

XChorniX: shukria laiken roti kyun hain?

thanx all!

[XChorniX]

kya karain, jub ese shers hote hain tou dard bhi tou hota hai

[Capricorn]

Re: Thori si shaiyri!

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Hum Hain: *
**Is qadar dil ko lagaya hi nahin tha hum ne
chorna chaha to hanste huey chora hum ne
*
[/QUOTE]

faida kia?

[Hum_Hain]

Re: Re: Thori si shaiyri!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

faida kia?
[/QUOTE]

Faidaa? ye koi poochne ki baat hai!
Faaida ye hua keh chorna chaha to hanste hue chora hum ne

unlike rote hue chorna! :p

[Loaffer]

HUm Hain it's for u

ye zamiiN roii aasmaan ke saath
jab Ramaayan jalii Quraan ke saath

be_zubaaN shakhs likh to saktaa hai
haath bhi kaaT do zabaan ke saath

tiirgii ne ajeeb saazish kee
dostee kee mire makaan ke saath

surKhee-e-gul ka kuchh to rishtaa hai
surKhee-e-khoon-e-baghbaan ke saath

umr bhar zabt kar liyaa lekin
aah nikal hee gayee hai jaan ke saath

shor-o-Ghul tha feroz ke andar
so na paayaa wo itminaan ke saath

[Hum_Hain]

*Originally posted by Loaffer: *
HUm Hain it’s for u

ye zamiiN roii aasmaan ke saath
jab Ramaayan jalii Quraan ke saath

be_zubaaN shakhs likh to saktaa hai
haath bhi kaaT do zabaan ke saath

tiirgii ne ajeeb saazish kee
dostee kee mire makaan ke saath

surKhee-e-gul ka kuchh to rishtaa hai
surKhee-e-khoon-e-baghbaan ke saath

umr bhar zabt kar liyaa lekin
aah nikal hee gayee hai jaan ke saath

shor-o-Ghul tha feroz ke andar
so na paayaa wo itminaan ke saath

zahe-naseeb; zahe-naseeb!
very nice!
thanku!

[sleeping_beauty_1]

v.v.v nice!