thokaaR lagaieY aur bikhaRnay nahi dya

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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go muj ko gaRdishooN ne sanwaRnay nahi dya
lakiN teRay khaloos ne maRnay nahi dya

ahsaaN hai ye us ka meRa zaraf dekh kaR
thokaaR lagaieY aur bikhaRnay nahi dya

hum teRi dosti maiN agaR luut gaye tu kia
ashkooN se teRi ankh ko bhaRnay nahi dya

is raabteY ko toRna asaa’N tha magaR
teRi nazaR ne faisla kaRnay nahi dya

haR aashk-e-beqarar ko hum ne be kisi waqat
ankhooN k sahilooN pe ubhaRnay nahi dya:teary3:

manzil k paas jitni aa’zeat mili mujhaY
itna tu dukh tumam safaR ne nahi dya :teary3:

ik rabt-e-lazawal ne teRay he shahaR se
muj ko kabhi sakooN se guazaRnay nahi dya

mana jafayeN tu ne Tabassam pe ki magaR
dil se tujhaY tu phiR be utaRanay nahi dya

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Re: thokaaR lagaieY aur bikhaRnay nahi dya

Bohat khoob NikamiJi…poori ghazal hi bohat shaandaar hey:):k:

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wow
very nice:k:

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keep it up good work:k:

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hum teRi dosti maiN agaR luut gaye tu kia
ashkooN se teRi ankh ko bhaRnay nahi dya

mana jafayeN tu ne Tabassam pe ki magaR
dil se tujhaY tu phiR be utaRanay nahi dya

hamesha ki tarah bahot hi achhi ghazal post ki hai , bahna aap ne.
thanks for sharing.

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buhat khoob :k:

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Good one !

Beaitbaar waqt pay jhunjhulla ke ro paray
Kho kar ussay kabhi, tukabhi paa kar ro paray
Khushiyan hamaare paas kahan mustaqil raheen
Bahar kabhi hansay, tu ghar aa kar ro paray

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Very Nice NJ!

mana jafayeN tu ne Tabassam pe ki magaR
dil se tujhaY tu phiR be utaRanay nahi dya

Tabassam??? :rolleyes: , yeh sub kub say??? :slight_smile:

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Re: thokaaR lagaieY aur bikhaRnay nahi dya

awwwwwww Thanks for sharing NJ sis, Nice choice but :frowning:

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Re: thokaaR lagaieY aur bikhaRnay nahi dya

veryyyyyy nice :k::flower1:

mana jafayeN tu ne :rolleyes:Tabassam:rolleyes: pe ki magaR
dil se tujhaY tu phiR be utaRanay nahi dya

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hmmmm…bhoot achay… :k:

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Re: Re: thokaaR lagaieY aur bikhaRnay nahi dya

Thanks Amal sahi tareef ki hia kahin peehcaly zakhmooN per marham tu nahi rakh rahya..:wink:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
hum teRi dosti maiN agaR luut gaye tu kia
ashkooN se teRi ankh ko bhaRnay nahi dya

mana jafayeN tu ne Tabassam pe ki magaR
dil se tujhaY tu phiR be utaRanay nahi dya

hamesha ki tarah bahot hi achhi ghazal post ki hai , bahna aap ne.
thanks for sharing.
[/QUOTE]

thanks Pra g......and ramzan Mubarak ap ko...:)

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thanks kisi ki gazal...jaan lawa..arifnawz..HH..and G-e-Tea..don't be sad na..gazal tu sad he achi lagti keon ...keep smilling:)

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ye tab se jab se sab ne jafayen ki :wink:

thanks ** Eastren ** from westren aur kahan gayeb hain ap nazar nahi a rahya kahin be …hamin he nazar nahi atye ye phir ** Sab ** ko he :wink:

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excellent nikami siso

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Re: Re: thokaaR lagaieY aur bikhaRnay nahi dya

:cool: :blush: thanks chando g…:slight_smile:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

ye tab se jab se sab ne jafayen ki ;)

thanks ** Eastren ** from westren aur kahan gayeb hain ap nazar nahi a rahya kahin be ...hamin he nazar nahi atye ye phir ** Sab ** ko he ;)
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aacha tu now U ** Westren **
, Wo iqbal kahtay hain na

ham mashriq ke musalamaano.n kaa dil maGrib me.n jaa aTakaa hai
wahaa.N ku.ntar sab billorii hai, yahaa.N ek puraanaa maTakaa hai

[kuntar=glass; billori=crystal]

tu U know aysay western tu not acceptable ;) , wasay kahnay main koi huraj nahi, i know what u r :) , khuch loog mughay bata raahay thay kay jub wo West say East main jaatay tu aysay zoooor say chaader etc kurtay kay loog sumaghtay burtan dhoonay wali massi a gai ;)

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:crying: