thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

**sakooN-e-jaaN ke lee'ye ab maiN duaa kaise kaRooN dard jab tu ne dee'ya hai to gilaa kaise karooN

aksaR lauTaa huun manzil se yahi soch k maiN
ab muqammal ye safar teRe binaa kaise kaRooN

meRe she’roN meiN ye asaR kahaaN tha pehle
karz maiN teri jafaaon ka adaa kaise karooN

zindagi bhaR ki wafaaoN ka silaa hai yaaro
dil-e-barbaad k zaKhmoN ki davaa kaise kaRooN

thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii
apni taqdeeR ka ab tuj se gilaa kaise karooN

meRi nas-nas meiN basaa hai jo lahuu baN k Dost
uski yaadoN se kinaaRa maiN bhalaa kaise kaRooN

ab munaasib hai yahi usko bhulaa duuN maiN
haaN magaR phuul ko khushbuu se judaa kaise kaRooN **

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

bohot khoobsorat Nikamiji… :k:

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

merey sher'oun may ye aser kahan tha pehly
karz may teri jafaon ka ada kesy keroun

the koi mere he hathoun ke lekeroun may kami
apni taqdeer ka ab tuj say gila kesey kroun

achi hy:)

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

bohat hi khoob :lajawab:

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

b0hat kh00b :)

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

Veryy nice..thanks for sharing nikami jii :)

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

great selection as usual :lajawab:

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

Nikamijano Its Awesome ................
Har shair Bohat Umdaa Hai....
Lovely Sharing...:)

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

buhut khub :k:

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

Jano ji...ik ik sher pe mae wari janwaa....bahot lajawab ghazal pesh ki aap ne. aap ke intikhaab ke kya kehne!

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

bohat khub SHAB JEE.

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

^ :omg: not Shab taliba Nikami ji post this ghazal :mocking:

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

itna bura haal:teary1:

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

shukria JW is qurbani ka but baqRa eid dooR hai abhi :)

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

Bura haal mera nahi taliba ka hai jis nay nikami ji ki jaga shab likh diya hai

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

wohi tu uni k leay kaha tha :(

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

Good 1!!!!!!!!!!!.

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

nice:naraz:

Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii

meRi nas-nas meiN basaa hai jo lahuu baN k Dost
uski yaadoN se kinaaRa maiN bhalaa kaise kaRooN

ab munaasib hai yahi usko bhulaa duuN maiN
haaN magaR phuul ko khushbuu se judaa kaise kaRooN

These two shers remind one of a poem of Rumi where he says he's only a shell and everything inside him belongs to his beloved as she has become an itreral part of his life, like fragrance is to the rose, she is to him. A good mataphor here, NikamiJano. If you wrote it, congratulaions. Otherwise to the one who wrote this
ghazal.