Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii
**sakooN-e-jaaN ke lee'ye ab maiN duaa kaise kaRooN**
**dard jab tu ne dee'ya hai to gilaa kaise karooN **
**aksaR lauTaa huun manzil se yahi soch k maiN**
**ab muqammal ye safar teRe binaa kaise kaRooN**
**meRe she'roN meiN ye asaR kahaaN tha pehle**
**karz maiN teri jafaaon ka adaa kaise karooN**
**zindagi bhaR ki wafaaoN ka silaa hai yaaro**
**dil-e-barbaad k zaKhmoN ki davaa kaise kaRooN**
**thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii**
**apni taqdeeR ka ab tuj se gilaa kaise karooN**
**meRi nas-nas meiN basaa hai jo lahuu baN k Dost**
**uski yaadoN se kinaaRa maiN bhalaa kaise kaRooN**
**ab munaasib hai yahi usko bhulaa duuN maiN**
**haaN magaR phuul ko khushbuu se judaa kaise kaRooN **
Nikamijano Its Awesome ................ Har shair Bohat Umdaa Hai.... Lovely Sharing...:)
Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii
**sakooN-e-jaaN ke lee'ye ab maiN duaa kaise kaRooN**
**dard jab tu ne dee'ya hai to gilaa kaise karooN **
**aksaR lauTaa huun manzil se yahi soch k maiN**
**ab muqammal ye safar teRe binaa kaise kaRooN**
**meRe she'roN meiN ye asaR kahaaN tha pehle**
**karz maiN teri jafaaon ka adaa kaise karooN**
**zindagi bhaR ki wafaaoN ka silaa hai yaaro**
**dil-e-barbaad k zaKhmoN ki davaa kaise kaRooN**
**thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii**
**apni taqdeeR ka ab tuj se gilaa kaise karooN**
**meRi nas-nas meiN basaa hai jo lahuu baN k Dost**
**uski yaadoN se kinaaRa maiN bhalaa kaise kaRooN**
**ab munaasib hai yahi usko bhulaa duuN maiN**
**haaN magaR phuul ko khushbuu se judaa kaise kaRooN **
Jano ji...ik ik sher pe mae wari janwaa....bahot lajawab ghazal pesh ki aap ne. aap ke intikhaab ke kya kehne!
Re: thi koi mere hi haaThon ki lakeeRoN meiN kamii
meRi nas-nas meiN basaa hai jo lahuu baN k Dost
uski yaadoN se kinaaRa maiN bhalaa kaise kaRooN
ab munaasib hai yahi usko bhulaa duuN maiN
haaN magaR phuul ko khushbuu se judaa kaise kaRooN
These two shers remind one of a poem of Rumi where he says he's only a shell and everything inside him belongs to his beloved as she has become an itreral part of his life, like fragrance is to the rose, she is to him. A good mataphor here, NikamiJano. If you wrote it, congratulaions. Otherwise to the one who wrote this
ghazal.