the Winner...Wohooo

Hello gups,

THis was the most difficult job for me to decide who wrote the best piece on the 14th of August. I believe any thing that you say and whatever you write for you dear homeland comes from inside your heart but then speaking strictly from professional point of view and judging each case on merit, I have arrived at the following conclusion.

The competition was intense and I got two entries for such a fantabolus event. I appreciate the time taken out by Mr/Ms Bewqoof and Mr. SadGuy to narrate their deepest feelings for their motherland in the form of poetry, just on my request. :jhanda:

Mr. Sad’s beautiful rendition was chosen for the runners up while BewQoofs poetry ranked first amongst these two entries. A round of applause for both these guppies. :biggthumb: I hope the citizenry of the poetry forum would not criticize my decision which I took after spending many sleepless nights worrying about who is more deserving of the No.1 slot.

Yours truely,

Minerva.

Chalain jee honsla afzai karain apnay guppy bhai behnoon ki. Shair hazraat ko tow khulay dil ka maliq hona cha hiyay :)

The Qoami Tarana by BewaQoof

Blessed be the sacred land,
Happy be the bounteous realm,
Symbol of high resolve,

Land of Pakistan.
Blessed be thou citadel of faith.

The Order of this Sacred Land
Is the might of the brotherhood of the people.
May the nation, the country, and the State
Shine in glory everlasting.
Blessed be the goal of our ambition.

This flag of the Crescent and the Star
Leads the way to progress and perfection,
Interpreter of our past, glory of our present,
Inspiration of our future,
Symbol of Almighty's protection

by Sad Guy ....
Karachi Tera Husan Da paylaa
Lahore Hi Tera Dil Wala

Sawat , Muree , Kalam, ko kiya kaho
Woh tu hi Paristaan Hamra

Pak Watan teri Pak Shaan
Tujhe pay Hi har dil qurban

Kero tera naam mai roshan
na janey ajj meray dil mai kiya hi Sahmaya

Sindh, Blochistan, Serhad, aur Punjab
ko mai kiya kaho yai tu hi 4 Baaz'oon teray!

Madhoshi-e-Alam hi aur ajeeb sa Tara'na!!

P A K I S T A N Z I N D A B A D

kewlll nice work done guys. let me the first to congratulate you guys. *clap clap, thapkis on the shoulders)

can't wait for this stuff to be in musical form.

Gr8 Work Guyz keep up the good work :)

MashAllah, finally some poetry I can read :bummer:

nice work guys, I wish I could write like this :biggthumb

^^ lolzz :smiley: :smiley: ..

Ps: congratzzzz :hula: ..

lolzz :rotfl: