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aight kaki i m bak
so get ready b4 i smack u in ur lil chubby head lol
n i was neva stressed out ...
u know how thes desi moms YELL SO LOUD !!!
dont get mad at me, cus ur rhymes SUCK
and u cant spit shizz back at me :D
im silent lyk a mime, i blow up like a mine
this sikk mind can kill a lil pantha wit six linez
P:s. omg .. m ssooooo sry ... but that WAS WELL WICKED MAYN !!!
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dabay mai daba , dabay mai cake , fatima humhari , lakho mai aik 
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dabey mien deba .. dabey mien roda pebble
janwar tere ko mien nazer nai aya .. tera moo hai k PAKOORA !! lol just playin pai saab 
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janwar mamoee!! u rite the cutest things!!..
a few words from u, are worth more than a golden ring...
slik i think u needa cut back on the insults, man...
i know its hard 4 u...but just try, if u can...:)
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comon kaki u know , u cant xpect from me no sanity
atleast i m keeping it low n bringin no profanity
y dont u play around n live in ur fantasy
i don care wat u feel , i write wat i like
don give a damn if others say its not rite
n therz no way u can battle me
even the hardest u try to flattern me
ill still be the PUNJABI no 1 in real
dont care, wat yall feeel ! >>stolen<<
so quit tryin n leap out of ur day dream
else i ma pinch u, n u gona wake up with a loud scream :D
standing my level is gona take u TOO MUCH !
yet i'vent seen any gutts in u as such .
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Life is tough I have learned
being pushed around is not fun.
Friends that I use to hang out with
called me up and said ur out man.
Tears in my eye started flowing as I
listen to them jerks unfolding.
Losers I don't need u
I can live with my shadow.
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ok i agree its not that good.
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aaw that was great! :k:…even tho this is the rhyming thread…lol..but that was still good 
i hope that’s not true for u tho 
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ahaaa…nice one slik
ok i admit, that last one was ur best…
but now i’m here..so just give it a rest…
sigh so anyways hows u alls spring break going?
mine was aight at first, but now it’s pretty boring…
but today i am happy and only for one thing…
i’m about to get a cell phone so i can go bling bling…
…crap my poetry sux at 10:30 in tha morning…
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Oh gosh a lot has happened since i was away
phatima u doing great but who am i to say
bombastic ur good too but u dont always rhyme
i am sure u’ll get better all u need to do is pray 
i donno what i m saying but am having lots of fun 
Do tell me if u like it..if u dont ur a bum 
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tite 
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shoaib- bite me 
lol…
tweety -
aah yea tweety, finally someone who can rhyme…
cuz bbombastic over here is just wasting my time…
i have to keep saying that this isnt RAPPING…
but bombastic thinx it is…he’s too bizee wit his crapping…
sigh
i’m in a really bad mood rite now..
i feel like smacking someone like wapow…
but instead i think i’ll go to my little corner over here…
and cry my heart out with every last tear 
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Whats up Phatima whats making u sad:(
seeing u in this mood makes me feel bad
tell me what to do that would make things right
if i can bring a smile :) on ur face i really will be glad
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sigh i dunno i’ve just been p-oed cuz ppl bin acting gay…
but then again, it’s the DC boiz, what more can i say…
and whats really annoying me is how my clock keeps going “tick”
and i still cant find my cherry-flavored chapstick
and now my calculator isnt working rite…
it’ll only work under sunlight..
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hey phatima...i have a poetry project..wanna help?
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**I scratch and scratch to no avail 
**
**she was funny, cute had a tail 
**
why did I say ‘love you’ to this dame?
**weren’t there other girls in the game? 
**
Next time I’ll borrow Faizy jee ka lota
It brought ‘luck’ to a ‘single’ Khota 
blush::k:
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depends on what i gotta rite a poem about…and weather or not i have to keep it appropriate…but yea sure, i’d love to help out 
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umm..what are u talking about?
i’m confused
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[quote=“Raindance”]
Phati ^
I scratch and scratch to no avail (deep in thoughts)
she was funny, cute had a tail (about a girl I met and liked)
why did I say ‘love you’ to this dame? (later on I regreted saying 'Love U)
weren’t there other girls in the game? (I ignored some1 who wud love me more)
Next time I’ll borrow Faizy jee ka lota (Next time if I do $hyt things up I’l wash it with Faizy ka lota) - I can’t translate that - Toilet paper is the nearest
It brought ‘luck’ to a ‘single’ Khota (another dude with the same problem got lucky other wise he was a arse bolay to Donkey wala )
Never before I had to expalin some thing so simple in such defficult words,
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…
eh?! ehhh!!! 
…
raindance, ur poem is giving me a headache…
try to make some sense, for God’s sake!!